for Come Together6/18/2018 c4 Guest
This is kinda old so I’m not sure if you’ll continue to write it but I hope you do! It’s really good and ed is so cute! You’re really good at writing them!
This is kinda old so I’m not sure if you’ll continue to write it but I hope you do! It’s really good and ed is so cute! You’re really good at writing them!
6/18/2018 c5 Guest
This is so good! I love love love it!
This is so good! I love love love it!
7/27/2013 c5 
3LadyTraveler
Yay! I was hoping you would update, but no pressure. Sometimes it's hard, you're doing great though!
3LadyTravelerYay! I was hoping you would update, but no pressure. Sometimes it's hard, you're doing great though!
4/17/2011 c4 54totalizzyness
I love this, you must pair her with Ed! Please! :')
Keep writing, this is awesome (:
54totalizzynessI love this, you must pair her with Ed! Please! :')
Keep writing, this is awesome (:
12/22/2010 c4 SicklySweetNanny
I'm likin it so far! Keep up the good work :)
Who will you be pairing Alex with, if you don't mind me asking? :]
I'm likin it so far! Keep up the good work :)
Who will you be pairing Alex with, if you don't mind me asking? :]
12/10/2010 c3 ch3rycola
i love this story XD keep going and i think ur english slangs were pretty good =) I lurvvvv nick morannnn! he is fineee! dang ! xD
i love this story XD keep going and i think ur english slangs were pretty good =) I lurvvvv nick morannnn! he is fineee! dang ! xD
7/19/2010 c4 12Sweet A.K
I like this story so far. It's hard to find a good fanfiction story for this movie, and I think you've done a stellar job at writing this one so far. I hope you continue with it!
Amanda
12Sweet A.KI like this story so far. It's hard to find a good fanfiction story for this movie, and I think you've done a stellar job at writing this one so far. I hope you continue with it!
Amanda
6/13/2010 c3 Sadie Hyde
Still enjoying, and still wondering why everyone calls Tom fat, he's so skinny! You're = you are , ex, Ed, you're a pain in the arse. Your - is this yours? Your wallet, your antique musket
Etc. Their - Ed and the boys couldn't believe their good luck at still being Alive after all the mess with Harry. They're - they are. They're celebrating their survival by getting pissed at Ed'd da's pub.
Please, please, please, don't think of this as negative crit, I just think you'll get more hits and reviews if you clean up the grammar a bit. Looking forward to reading more and learning about Alex's past in my homestate.
Still enjoying, and still wondering why everyone calls Tom fat, he's so skinny! You're = you are , ex, Ed, you're a pain in the arse. Your - is this yours? Your wallet, your antique musket
Etc. Their - Ed and the boys couldn't believe their good luck at still being Alive after all the mess with Harry. They're - they are. They're celebrating their survival by getting pissed at Ed'd da's pub.
Please, please, please, don't think of this as negative crit, I just think you'll get more hits and reviews if you clean up the grammar a bit. Looking forward to reading more and learning about Alex's past in my homestate.
6/13/2010 c2 Sadie Hyde
Still fun, but a few things. Their and there can get confusing but using them correctly is essential. As for good ol' cockney rhyming slang there are sites online that have TONS of words. The only example I can think of is 'elephants' for drunk. Bc trunk rhymes with drunk. Claret for blood, as you well know.. . Do a google search for uk slang dictionary and I'm sure you can find some great pointers. Also some Beta readers specialize in 'Brit picking' helping we sad colonials use the Queen's English correctly for writing. I'm not quite certain how you find a Brit Picker but prob the communities on here would be very helpful.
Also- for my own personal pleasure, find excuse for Bacon to be shirtless. Heh.
Still fun, but a few things. Their and there can get confusing but using them correctly is essential. As for good ol' cockney rhyming slang there are sites online that have TONS of words. The only example I can think of is 'elephants' for drunk. Bc trunk rhymes with drunk. Claret for blood, as you well know.. . Do a google search for uk slang dictionary and I'm sure you can find some great pointers. Also some Beta readers specialize in 'Brit picking' helping we sad colonials use the Queen's English correctly for writing. I'm not quite certain how you find a Brit Picker but prob the communities on here would be very helpful.
Also- for my own personal pleasure, find excuse for Bacon to be shirtless. Heh.
6/13/2010 c1 Sadie Hyde
Jersey! I'm in. Watched the film again last night so it's all fresh in my brain pan.
Jersey! I'm in. Watched the film again last night so it's all fresh in my brain pan.
5/31/2010 c4 Hrisinka Pisinka
Hey, just wanna say that this story is awesome ! I love it!
But you haven't updated in quite a while, hope you continue it.
Hey, just wanna say that this story is awesome ! I love it!
But you haven't updated in quite a while, hope you continue it.
7/26/2009 c4 1Shooks
Hello!
I'd just like to start by saying I LOVE your story so far!
I've only just got into Lock Stock (after watching it about 10 times to be able to understand it x)) and I think it's really great people write fan fiction for it :]
So I AM an ACTUAL English person, and I think your slang is ok at the mo :], but a few teeny tiny things, we don't all say 'Tis' and stuff, we speak PRETTY MUCH in the same was as you Americadoodlens :]
If you have any English-related questions, throw them my way!
It'll be interesting to see who Alex ends up with, it seems they all have a 'thing' for her :)
Looking forward to hearing more, please let me know if you've got ANY Englishy questions, I like questions x]
ILY!
Shooks
x
1ShooksHello!
I'd just like to start by saying I LOVE your story so far!
I've only just got into Lock Stock (after watching it about 10 times to be able to understand it x)) and I think it's really great people write fan fiction for it :]
So I AM an ACTUAL English person, and I think your slang is ok at the mo :], but a few teeny tiny things, we don't all say 'Tis' and stuff, we speak PRETTY MUCH in the same was as you Americadoodlens :]
If you have any English-related questions, throw them my way!
It'll be interesting to see who Alex ends up with, it seems they all have a 'thing' for her :)
Looking forward to hearing more, please let me know if you've got ANY Englishy questions, I like questions x]
ILY!
Shooks
x
4/19/2009 c2 3The Real Mistress Malfoy
Great job. I'm really looking forwards to your next chapter. Regarding the slang thing I fear I won't be much help - sorry. However, thank you so much for reviewing my story.
Keep your work up! :) (Alex in RL LOL)
3The Real Mistress MalfoyGreat job. I'm really looking forwards to your next chapter. Regarding the slang thing I fear I won't be much help - sorry. However, thank you so much for reviewing my story.
Keep your work up! :) (Alex in RL LOL)
4/14/2009 c2 18CosmicGirl22
hey! It me-the author of All Bets are Off. I really liek your fic here. its great! your brit slang sounds spot on to me! (but then again Im american so that might not be too much of a compliment hehe) I reaally like the way youre writing Alan ..aww hes sweet hehe... anyway cant wait for updates.
18CosmicGirl22hey! It me-the author of All Bets are Off. I really liek your fic here. its great! your brit slang sounds spot on to me! (but then again Im american so that might not be too much of a compliment hehe) I reaally like the way youre writing Alan ..aww hes sweet hehe... anyway cant wait for updates.