for A coward in the rain7/1/2013 c1 Omg
Sweetest thing EVER! Make a sequel please! (._.)/0 want the cookie
Sweetest thing EVER! Make a sequel please! (._.)/0 want the cookie
5/5/2013 c1 
23pottermommy1118
This was really sweet! I liked it, I liked your descriptiveness!
Sirius is so sweet, I love him standing up for James.
Only thing that threw me was the fact that Lily Luna is not this Lily, she is actually James' granddaughter hee hee, easy mistake to make though on the character selection :)
23pottermommy1118This was really sweet! I liked it, I liked your descriptiveness!
Sirius is so sweet, I love him standing up for James.
Only thing that threw me was the fact that Lily Luna is not this Lily, she is actually James' granddaughter hee hee, easy mistake to make though on the character selection :)
8/11/2011 c1 Kizziefoshnizziee
Lily Luna Potter is Harry and Ginny's daughter, from 19 years later, epilouge of 7th book. Harry's mother's middle name is unknown. James Sirius Potter is their son, Teddy Lupin is their godson, and Albus Severus Potter is their son too. Albus, after Dumbledore, Severus, after Snape. James, after his father, Sirius, after his godfather. Lily after his mother, Luna after Lovegood.
Lily Luna Potter is Harry and Ginny's daughter, from 19 years later, epilouge of 7th book. Harry's mother's middle name is unknown. James Sirius Potter is their son, Teddy Lupin is their godson, and Albus Severus Potter is their son too. Albus, after Dumbledore, Severus, after Snape. James, after his father, Sirius, after his godfather. Lily after his mother, Luna after Lovegood.
4/1/2010 c1 3anonymous23.19
Hey,
I liked this - particularly the Sirius/Lily scene.
Only one criticism - you used the 'orbs' word. It actually causes me physical pain to read that word.
Apart from that, good job!
3anonymous23.19Hey,
I liked this - particularly the Sirius/Lily scene.
Only one criticism - you used the 'orbs' word. It actually causes me physical pain to read that word.
Apart from that, good job!
4/18/2009 c1 freakymisbah
ok song is hello goodbye by the beatles cute story btw
love lily/james fanfics
ok song is hello goodbye by the beatles cute story btw
love lily/james fanfics
4/12/2009 c1 2KlainePotter
I loved it!
The song was originally by the Beatles, then the Jonas Brothers did a remake of it for their album and the Target commercial, and I love the song too!
2KlainePotterI loved it!
The song was originally by the Beatles, then the Jonas Brothers did a remake of it for their album and the Target commercial, and I love the song too!
4/12/2009 c1 13lookmeintheeyesnickjonas
I totally loved it! It was fully insane it was so awesome! Dang it-how do you manage to write so brillaintly! :D
The flashback was especially fantastic! The song is hello goodbye by the beatles but the jonas brothers do a cover :D
13lookmeintheeyesnickjonasI totally loved it! It was fully insane it was so awesome! Dang it-how do you manage to write so brillaintly! :D
The flashback was especially fantastic! The song is hello goodbye by the beatles but the jonas brothers do a cover :D
4/10/2009 c1 1cogitator
i love your story it is seriously awesome.
the song is hello goodbye by the jonas brothers
1cogitatori love your story it is seriously awesome.
the song is hello goodbye by the jonas brothers
4/10/2009 c1 IM GONE WITH THE WIND
my heart was literally in pieces.
it was so sad:(
lol, but then again im just a sucker for a good sob story, and James and lily are just to cute. :P
my heart was literally in pieces.
it was so sad:(
lol, but then again im just a sucker for a good sob story, and James and lily are just to cute. :P