for Breaking Free4/11/2009 c1 
22diamond-helen
Great start. The formatting is fine, i was expecting unreadable chaos from the a/n at the top! Update soon!
22diamond-helenGreat start. The formatting is fine, i was expecting unreadable chaos from the a/n at the top! Update soon!
4/10/2009 c1 65notwritten
This makes good reading. Interesting and cool. Thank you for sharing it. Have a good, safe, and fun Easter and Weekend. Keep smiling. :-)
65notwrittenThis makes good reading. Interesting and cool. Thank you for sharing it. Have a good, safe, and fun Easter and Weekend. Keep smiling. :-)
4/10/2009 c1 inkie2009
It was good so far. I really like it keep it up
It was good so far. I really like it keep it up
4/10/2009 c1 colormine
I am really looking forward to reading this story as it comes into fruition! Great job.
I am really looking forward to reading this story as it comes into fruition! Great job.
4/10/2009 c1 3Mrs. Story
Chica, I'm taking you up on that offer of yours. Read my cheesily titled story. Did you ever read it? I have a plot outline all planned out and I wanna have someone look over that too. I'll e-mail to you when I'm not lazy.
I can tell you wrote this story anywhere. Its so YOU. Only someone with some intelligence can understand the descriptions, deep intro, and vocabulary and all that. I LOVED the intro. It was a great hook. Hook is an insult compared to your intro actually, it was that ah-mazing.
This may come as a shock to you, but I didn't detect any grammar blemishes. I'm sure if I look over again, I'll find something. Like April, you have issues with run-on sentences. That's okay though. We all still love you.
Especially ME!
Call me sweet cheeks. ;P
3Mrs. StoryChica, I'm taking you up on that offer of yours. Read my cheesily titled story. Did you ever read it? I have a plot outline all planned out and I wanna have someone look over that too. I'll e-mail to you when I'm not lazy.
I can tell you wrote this story anywhere. Its so YOU. Only someone with some intelligence can understand the descriptions, deep intro, and vocabulary and all that. I LOVED the intro. It was a great hook. Hook is an insult compared to your intro actually, it was that ah-mazing.
This may come as a shock to you, but I didn't detect any grammar blemishes. I'm sure if I look over again, I'll find something. Like April, you have issues with run-on sentences. That's okay though. We all still love you.
Especially ME!
Call me sweet cheeks. ;P