for Wendi Dursley, First Year Witch8/9/2014 c2 marthapreston4
Wow at the end of the books dudley was showing scenes of not being such a butt in this he is horrible I am hoping he fixes that
Wow at the end of the books dudley was showing scenes of not being such a butt in this he is horrible I am hoping he fixes that
9/2/2009 c10 
12Chalyn the redneck bitch
very nice, kinda short but keep up the good work; sometimes it's better to be short and to the point...less is more and all that.
12Chalyn the redneck bitchvery nice, kinda short but keep up the good work; sometimes it's better to be short and to the point...less is more and all that.
8/30/2009 c10 FriendofMolly
That was good, if not short. Perhaps part of this story should be told in snippets. I don't know how the other Slytherins are going to react to a Muggleborn in their ranks? Probably not very good. On top of that Gabriel is not going to be happy to find out Wendi's connection to Harry. Could be dangerous, or it could be a learning experience. Hm? Good One.
That was good, if not short. Perhaps part of this story should be told in snippets. I don't know how the other Slytherins are going to react to a Muggleborn in their ranks? Probably not very good. On top of that Gabriel is not going to be happy to find out Wendi's connection to Harry. Could be dangerous, or it could be a learning experience. Hm? Good One.
8/23/2009 c9 12Chalyn the redneck bitch
Needs another few chapters...keep up the good work though! I look forward to seeing more; you really captured the style of the original books. I don't want to stop reading...anyway i look forward to seeing what happens to Wendi. Have fun with it and don't get stressed out...that never makes things any good. Just keep it up.
12Chalyn the redneck bitchNeeds another few chapters...keep up the good work though! I look forward to seeing more; you really captured the style of the original books. I don't want to stop reading...anyway i look forward to seeing what happens to Wendi. Have fun with it and don't get stressed out...that never makes things any good. Just keep it up.
8/23/2009 c9 1goldentree
Hi, I like your story. I'm curious how Wendi will do in Slytherin and about her relationship to the Potters and Weasleys.
1goldentreeHi, I like your story. I'm curious how Wendi will do in Slytherin and about her relationship to the Potters and Weasleys.
8/23/2009 c9 FriendofMolly
Well I guess that would be the Dursley part of her blood. Plus I think that being tied to her cousins might just be what she doesn't want. Good One.
Well I guess that would be the Dursley part of her blood. Plus I think that being tied to her cousins might just be what she doesn't want. Good One.
8/6/2009 c8 FriendofMolly
Hm very interesting. Poor Wendi. I bet it just caps off the journey so far. Not only was she abandoned by her parents? But kids she should have a bit in common with are leary. I can't wait to see more.
Hm very interesting. Poor Wendi. I bet it just caps off the journey so far. Not only was she abandoned by her parents? But kids she should have a bit in common with are leary. I can't wait to see more.
7/29/2009 c7 FriendofMolly
Oh dear, it's sad that Wendi has to deal with her parents not knowing how to deal with her. I'm thinking she will see a whole new world open up to her, if she's open to it. This flowed so well. It must have been difficult to write all the actions and reactions, but you did a real nice job with it. I can't wait for her first look at Hogwarts, and see her adventures there.
Oh dear, it's sad that Wendi has to deal with her parents not knowing how to deal with her. I'm thinking she will see a whole new world open up to her, if she's open to it. This flowed so well. It must have been difficult to write all the actions and reactions, but you did a real nice job with it. I can't wait for her first look at Hogwarts, and see her adventures there.