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2/26/2010 c1 14Mint.and.Chocolate
Que lindo oneshot *-*

Hice un pequeño esfuerzo y lo leí aunque esté en ingles xD no es que no sepa, pero me suele dar fiaca traducir xD ya ves, te dejo un review en español xD

Esta muy bonito, y es una canción preciosa :D

Gracias por tus reviews ^^ me alegra que te haya gustado tanto mi fic xD nos leemos! :D
8/14/2009 c1 3Dark-Wiccan-Goddess
why is this rated M? There's no swearing, no smut. This is K. K+ at worst. The rating is very misleading.
4/14/2009 c1 spellbound-99
This was very choppy and hard to follow. I understand if your English isn't very good, but you need to get a Beta to help you out a little here so things are smoother and easier to read. Good luck!
4/14/2009 c1 IAmNotAnIgnoramus
dammint write more
4/14/2009 c1 1Cryrey
This is so sweet. I really like that song and you made the story just oerfect for this song.
4/13/2009 c1 Melissa612
I'm going to be honest, I love the song you chose but half the time I had no clue what was going on. It was too choppy, you need to explain things more and I would also suggest using "quotation" marks when someone is speaking, it's easier to read and understand.

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