for Never Let Go2/25/2016 c1 
40Vitlium
Oh God those final words 0-0 Al you Psycho i don't wanna know what he's gonna do with his brother when he really snaps
40VitliumOh God those final words 0-0 Al you Psycho i don't wanna know what he's gonna do with his brother when he really snaps
6/16/2011 c1 2Skyrere
nicely done. :D
I loved it. Quite creepy and believable. Who wouldn't go a little insane being trapped in a metal body like that?
2Skyrerenicely done. :D
I loved it. Quite creepy and believable. Who wouldn't go a little insane being trapped in a metal body like that?
2/3/2011 c1 3NeonNijiNeko
This scared me! I always had the idea of a dark side of al floating in my head but this struck fear into my heart! The alley scene, oh dear god I was scared! Goose bumps. Reading even though it's obvious what was gonna happen. Then. "Oops, my mistake." that drove my heart into a frenzy! I wanted al to get Ed but to kill Roy! Then when he was comforting Ed I was thinking "he's manipulating you Ed!" but another part of me was like "Mustang never even deserved Ed." anyways.. I LOVED this!
3NeonNijiNekoThis scared me! I always had the idea of a dark side of al floating in my head but this struck fear into my heart! The alley scene, oh dear god I was scared! Goose bumps. Reading even though it's obvious what was gonna happen. Then. "Oops, my mistake." that drove my heart into a frenzy! I wanted al to get Ed but to kill Roy! Then when he was comforting Ed I was thinking "he's manipulating you Ed!" but another part of me was like "Mustang never even deserved Ed." anyways.. I LOVED this!
4/27/2009 c1 1steel-alchemist
This is the first fic I've seen in which Al has a dark side. Your point of view is really interesting, and now that I think about it, it does makes sense; Alphonse IS human after all. Poor Roy though ^^ (sweatdrop)
this goes to faves!
1steel-alchemistThis is the first fic I've seen in which Al has a dark side. Your point of view is really interesting, and now that I think about it, it does makes sense; Alphonse IS human after all. Poor Roy though ^^ (sweatdrop)
this goes to faves!
4/26/2009 c1 30Red Roses2
Oh my God, that is so creepy. Especially the scene where Mustang realizes what's really happening. Oh my God. "Oops, my mistake." With it SAID like that! *shudders*
30Red Roses2Oh my God, that is so creepy. Especially the scene where Mustang realizes what's really happening. Oh my God. "Oops, my mistake." With it SAID like that! *shudders*