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9/18/2009 c1 helloheart
Ohh! This fic was just wonderful! I loved it. (:
7/15/2009 c1 19RiverClan's Brambleheart
Honestly? I thought it was beautiful, the way the words flowed. But, I don't think Katara would cheat on Aang. She's too nice for that. I had hoped she would end up with Zuko in the anime/cartoon. I was upset when she kissed Aang at the end. Anyway the writing is very good if a little OOC. Nice job! Zutara all the way!
5/15/2009 c1 6I'm a Blank Sheet
A great writer knows when to get opinions and 'constructive criticism'...

so there's no need for any of that

:3
4/23/2009 c1 lazyguy90
Very cool work on this, nice one. Keep it up.
4/19/2009 c1 3Enclarity
ohh, i like this.

i love the flashbacks and the transition from one time to the next is smooth. i love it. :D
4/16/2009 c1 18kenokosan
that was beautiful.T_T
4/15/2009 c1 BitterLee
Love the way this is styled. It was a very interesting format. I'm all for Zutara, too, so that's a real bonus.
4/15/2009 c1 sweet-impact
I really liked how the sentences are simple yet it holds deep meanings. (And also really nice on the eyes how everything is not jumbled up together hehe...)

But I thought the last sentence didn't really conclude this wonderful one shot... it doesn't seem 'open', if you know what I mean :P
4/15/2009 c1 19x.Radish.x
Honestly? I loved it.

I thought the structure of the piece was clever in its simplicity, and the way you said so much in so few words is an admirable trait.

I look forward to reading more from you. :)

Maddie. xx
4/15/2009 c1 1FIRE LADY OREN
This is absolutly beautifull...

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