8/11/2009 c7 89minerva's-kitten
I don't believe it. (looks gobsmacked) Celina's winning!
Albus what the blody hell did you go home for! Get you butt back over there!
Nice chapter though girl.
I don't believe it. (looks gobsmacked) Celina's winning!
Albus what the blody hell did you go home for! Get you butt back over there!
Nice chapter though girl.
8/11/2009 c7 70Ginger McGonagall
I really enjoyed that chapter. Poor Albus! And poor Minerva! How could her mother do that to her? I eagerly await the next chapter. Please update soon.
Take care,
Paige x
I really enjoyed that chapter. Poor Albus! And poor Minerva! How could her mother do that to her? I eagerly await the next chapter. Please update soon.
Take care,
Paige x
5/25/2009 c6 89minerva's-kitten
ACK! Bloody Hell!
(Katherine): Celina McGonagal what the hell do you think you are doing to that poor boy! You don't deserve the McGonagall name!
(me) [boxes Katherine and blushes} Sorry Penny! I don't know how she got out...although seeing Albus behind me grinning I can guess. XD
Okay so Celina needs to go down that's for sure. William get your butt in gear!
OH and a fragmented sentence is a sentence with no clear cute meaning to it.
example...
(fragment): Brown turkeys dance.
(actual sentence): The brown turkeys dance together in the pen.
hope this helps!
ACK! Bloody Hell!
(Katherine): Celina McGonagal what the hell do you think you are doing to that poor boy! You don't deserve the McGonagall name!
(me) [boxes Katherine and blushes} Sorry Penny! I don't know how she got out...although seeing Albus behind me grinning I can guess. XD
Okay so Celina needs to go down that's for sure. William get your butt in gear!
OH and a fragmented sentence is a sentence with no clear cute meaning to it.
example...
(fragment): Brown turkeys dance.
(actual sentence): The brown turkeys dance together in the pen.
hope this helps!
5/10/2009 c5 2Whoopsydaisy
Looks like a great story so far. I love your Dumbledore. Looking forward to reading more. :)
Looks like a great story so far. I love your Dumbledore. Looking forward to reading more. :)
5/8/2009 c5 70Ginger McGonagall
I look forward to reading what you have in store for the perfect couple.
Take care.
Paige x
I look forward to reading what you have in store for the perfect couple.
Take care.
Paige x
5/8/2009 c5 89minerva's-kitten
Nice chapter. I want to see more of William's back bone though.
And your welcome for the inspiration. what goes around comes around! You give me some and I pay back dues! XD
Nice chapter. I want to see more of William's back bone though.
And your welcome for the inspiration. what goes around comes around! You give me some and I pay back dues! XD
4/26/2009 c4 89minerva's-kitten
Dude! I hate Celina...although I think I just got a good drama piece for Kat and Fi! XD
Poor Albus he tried to be honest and it was thrown in his face. So sad.
Dude! I hate Celina...although I think I just got a good drama piece for Kat and Fi! XD
Poor Albus he tried to be honest and it was thrown in his face. So sad.
4/22/2009 c3 minerva's-kitten
That chapter was too short for my taste love. But I do love her father. and the nicknames XD can't wait for more!
That chapter was too short for my taste love. But I do love her father. and the nicknames XD can't wait for more!
4/22/2009 c3 70Ginger McGonagall
It's going great! I look forward to the next chapter.
Take care.
Paige.
It's going great! I look forward to the next chapter.
Take care.
Paige.
4/21/2009 c2 89minerva's-kitten
It's a very adorable story. A little run-onny but still very nice. Love to meet Minerva' s mother next XD
By the way pm me. I got a couple questions you could help my plot bunny on my Mi-Mi story with.
It's a very adorable story. A little run-onny but still very nice. Love to meet Minerva' s mother next XD
By the way pm me. I got a couple questions you could help my plot bunny on my Mi-Mi story with.
4/21/2009 c2 70Ginger McGonagall
I'm hooked. I'm loving every last word of it. I look foward to reading the next chapter, soon.
Take care.
Paige
I'm hooked. I'm loving every last word of it. I look foward to reading the next chapter, soon.
Take care.
Paige