for The Hotness of Jimmy Frisbee1/3/2018 c3 Guest
Ah ...such happy ending* wiping away tears of joy*. So much satisfaction. I love kiba and jimmy frisbee.
Ah ...such happy ending* wiping away tears of joy*. So much satisfaction. I love kiba and jimmy frisbee.
7/25/2011 c3 nekolin
Lololol. The crack is where you interrupt to say hilarious things! Your a/n's make me laugh...
Lololol. The crack is where you interrupt to say hilarious things! Your a/n's make me laugh...
11/1/2010 c1 YaoiLover-Chan
This makes me want to write a story. I mean, I really wanna write one but it's so fucking hard to write because I got my nails done for Halloween. I haven't ever written a story but now that I have an awesome idea and the spunk to write it, I type like my mom :(
But this is a good story. "How nice."
-Len
This makes me want to write a story. I mean, I really wanna write one but it's so fucking hard to write because I got my nails done for Halloween. I haven't ever written a story but now that I have an awesome idea and the spunk to write it, I type like my mom :(
But this is a good story. "How nice."
-Len
9/12/2010 c3 YaoiLover-Chan
I got one. Crack: They kissed.
EXPLAIN WOMAN: That was dissapointingly Out-Of-Character ! They didn't make out and have hot passionate sex on Naru's lawn, pubic-be-damned, leading to Naru mpreg n' cute little twincest twin baby twins like they always do.
I got one. Crack: They kissed.
EXPLAIN WOMAN: That was dissapointingly Out-Of-Character ! They didn't make out and have hot passionate sex on Naru's lawn, pubic-be-damned, leading to Naru mpreg n' cute little twincest twin baby twins like they always do.
3/21/2010 c3 
15inuharrytwiclique
LOL! Wow! I haven't looked one here in a while then I remebered about the jimmy frisbee story and I had to check it out! It's still as funny as when it had only one chapter! Wow it's been a while since i've talked to you ^_- We've both got a lot more than before! Wow!
15inuharrytwicliqueLOL! Wow! I haven't looked one here in a while then I remebered about the jimmy frisbee story and I had to check it out! It's still as funny as when it had only one chapter! Wow it's been a while since i've talked to you ^_- We've both got a lot more than before! Wow!
11/16/2009 c2 3xXiMxAxPoTaToXx
GOD I LOVE YOUR SENSE OF HUMOR WOMAN! I can haz Spork of Doom? :D
Haha...Fancy French CLub of Fanciness and Frenchiness...teehee 8)
"Bread roll?"
God, I love Kiba in this fic *kiba fangirl*
Fear my random review of randomness...PHEER EET! :3
3xXiMxAxPoTaToXxGOD I LOVE YOUR SENSE OF HUMOR WOMAN! I can haz Spork of Doom? :D
Haha...Fancy French CLub of Fanciness and Frenchiness...teehee 8)
"Bread roll?"
God, I love Kiba in this fic *kiba fangirl*
Fear my random review of randomness...PHEER EET! :3
11/6/2009 c3 2MichiyoSN
Hey,
I really liked your OS "The hotness of Jimmy Frisbee" and I think you destroyed your own OS by adding more chaperts. The OS was well-written and cute and I smiled while reading it but the new chapter weren't as entertaining.
To say the truth I caught me thinking how cliché some parts were and sometimes I tried really hard not to roll my eyes. I mean seriously what's with you people and bashing? It's not funny... it's boring because it is on every poor-written SasuNaru-FF. It gets old. I don't want to read how some girls are after Sasuke and get "cursed" or something. I want just read how Sasuke and Naruto got together... the rest is unnecessary.
I don't want to insult you or your writing ability because honestly I loved the OS. I hope that you aren't angry with me but I think you should delete the last two chapters and leave THOJF alone.
Michiyo
2MichiyoSNHey,
I really liked your OS "The hotness of Jimmy Frisbee" and I think you destroyed your own OS by adding more chaperts. The OS was well-written and cute and I smiled while reading it but the new chapter weren't as entertaining.
To say the truth I caught me thinking how cliché some parts were and sometimes I tried really hard not to roll my eyes. I mean seriously what's with you people and bashing? It's not funny... it's boring because it is on every poor-written SasuNaru-FF. It gets old. I don't want to read how some girls are after Sasuke and get "cursed" or something. I want just read how Sasuke and Naruto got together... the rest is unnecessary.
I don't want to insult you or your writing ability because honestly I loved the OS. I hope that you aren't angry with me but I think you should delete the last two chapters and leave THOJF alone.
Michiyo
11/4/2009 c1 2Axiome
*flames* You can't smother these flames of amasteru!
*gets sporked* Okay, I'll stop... anyways...
it was so OOC (not in a bad way) that it was funny, lol.
2Axiome*flames* You can't smother these flames of amasteru!
*gets sporked* Okay, I'll stop... anyways...
it was so OOC (not in a bad way) that it was funny, lol.
11/1/2009 c3 14AnjoRemix
i'm laughing my head off and now choking...give me a sec...*runs to the bathroom*...okay...i started laughing when Kakashi was like..."Wanna make out?"..and then it turned to hiccups..until.."Where have you been all my life?" pfft...i'm ganna start...crap...i cnt' write properly rite now...pft...BWUAHAHAHAhah
14AnjoRemixi'm laughing my head off and now choking...give me a sec...*runs to the bathroom*...okay...i started laughing when Kakashi was like..."Wanna make out?"..and then it turned to hiccups..until.."Where have you been all my life?" pfft...i'm ganna start...crap...i cnt' write properly rite now...pft...BWUAHAHAHAhah
11/1/2009 c1 AnjoRemix
i'm hiccuping right now from holding my laughter in the middle of the night since i can't sleep right now...how can u murder a person with a freaken spork? hahahhaahahah! just give me a moment to calm down...pfft...BWUHAHAAHHAH!
i'm hiccuping right now from holding my laughter in the middle of the night since i can't sleep right now...how can u murder a person with a freaken spork? hahahhaahahah! just give me a moment to calm down...pfft...BWUHAHAAHHAH!
7/26/2009 c1 15inuharrytwiclique
LOL i love the jimmy frisbee name that made me laugh so hard and made my mom look at me like i'd grown another head. it's good to laugh once in a while thnx!
15inuharrytwicliqueLOL i love the jimmy frisbee name that made me laugh so hard and made my mom look at me like i'd grown another head. it's good to laugh once in a while thnx!