for The Woods are Lovely, Dark, and Deep8/14 c40 
2Clumsy Bedo
Holy... First things first... I found a screenshot on my phone of an update of this fic hat someone had posted on Facebook. And I thought hell yes let's read this. I have barely slept these last three nights because I was so deeply invested... The characters are so well written, the plot, the writing style. I love it all. But I only realised while reading the 39th chapter that this fic is not finished. I saw you've been writing it for the last 15 years so I desperately hope with all my heart that you will continue writing it. It will definitely always stay in my head as one of these fics you never forget and always come back to. So yeah. Thank you for this amazing piece so far. Here's to hoping for more <3
2Clumsy BedoHoly... First things first... I found a screenshot on my phone of an update of this fic hat someone had posted on Facebook. And I thought hell yes let's read this. I have barely slept these last three nights because I was so deeply invested... The characters are so well written, the plot, the writing style. I love it all. But I only realised while reading the 39th chapter that this fic is not finished. I saw you've been writing it for the last 15 years so I desperately hope with all my heart that you will continue writing it. It will definitely always stay in my head as one of these fics you never forget and always come back to. So yeah. Thank you for this amazing piece so far. Here's to hoping for more <3
8/6 c40 nicki
I HAVE WAITED 10 YEARS AND I'LL WAIT ANOTHER 10 MORE FOR THIS FIC TO BE DONE! I LOVE YOU!
I HAVE WAITED 10 YEARS AND I'LL WAIT ANOTHER 10 MORE FOR THIS FIC TO BE DONE! I LOVE YOU!
3/5 c40 fuz
This is one of the first fabulous stories I started reading back then when I discovered FanFiction.
I feel so freshly fangirly reading it now! It is so mysterious and familiar!
Thank you for not abandoning it.
This is one of the first fabulous stories I started reading back then when I discovered FanFiction.
I feel so freshly fangirly reading it now! It is so mysterious and familiar!
Thank you for not abandoning it.
12/17/2023 c40 1jedigirlsc
This is GREAT! I really enjoyed reading this story again from the start. I look forward to more chapters!
1jedigirlscThis is GREAT! I really enjoyed reading this story again from the start. I look forward to more chapters!
11/13/2023 c40 laavalicious
Hi! Just wanted to drop by and say, I'm so pleasantly surprised to see an update in this story! This has truly been one of my favourite stories, your writing, pacing, and ability to build an atmosphere is great. I hope you can keep updating, no matter how slow it is. Cheers!
Hi! Just wanted to drop by and say, I'm so pleasantly surprised to see an update in this story! This has truly been one of my favourite stories, your writing, pacing, and ability to build an atmosphere is great. I hope you can keep updating, no matter how slow it is. Cheers!
8/20/2023 c39 cinnynala1
I want you to know how absolutely thrilled I am that you are continuing this story. Every time I would come across it over the years, I would instantly get sucked back in and end up rereading the whole thing! It is one of my favorites because of the way you slowly reveal Edwards feelings. Masterfully done! Now I can’t wait to see the vampires come out to play. Please give poor Edward a happy ending - he’s been through enough!
I want you to know how absolutely thrilled I am that you are continuing this story. Every time I would come across it over the years, I would instantly get sucked back in and end up rereading the whole thing! It is one of my favorites because of the way you slowly reveal Edwards feelings. Masterfully done! Now I can’t wait to see the vampires come out to play. Please give poor Edward a happy ending - he’s been through enough!
8/7/2023 c40 Rita01tx
Holy crap! What a freaky way to end an already crazy evenin'! At this point, I'm not so sure their "problem" won't follow them to Florida which would be totally no bueno for Charlie and Renee, right!?
Holy crap! What a freaky way to end an already crazy evenin'! At this point, I'm not so sure their "problem" won't follow them to Florida which would be totally no bueno for Charlie and Renee, right!?
8/7/2023 c39 Rita01tx
Well, that's what I call comin' back with a BANG! Holy cannoli, Batman! Havin' been reminded by a marathon reread that James was on the prowl, I can only assume Victoria is Edward's "hallucination," although hallucinations don't usually leave proof of their existence! Also, more and more Cullens are comin' out of the woodwork, luckily for Edward, methinks LOL!
Well, that's what I call comin' back with a BANG! Holy cannoli, Batman! Havin' been reminded by a marathon reread that James was on the prowl, I can only assume Victoria is Edward's "hallucination," although hallucinations don't usually leave proof of their existence! Also, more and more Cullens are comin' out of the woodwork, luckily for Edward, methinks LOL!
8/3/2023 c40 VryUnique
Scary! Why is she playing with them? I’m going to assume the jacket wasn’t there when she opened the door, she could have killed them already. I assume it is Victoria and not James. She had said to Edward that she is breaking the rules. Which rules were that? Feeding where she shouldn’t be or letting a human know the secret.
I would have never gave my statement with Sullivan in the room. He seems like a real obnoxious
asshole. Seems like the kind of cop that would let an innocent go to jail as long as he got praise
or credit for catching them.
Where are the Cullens? Where are the wolves? Why aren’t they able to keep Victoria away from them?
A couple of them outside the hotel would stop what is happening, right? It doesn’t make sense.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Scary! Why is she playing with them? I’m going to assume the jacket wasn’t there when she opened the door, she could have killed them already. I assume it is Victoria and not James. She had said to Edward that she is breaking the rules. Which rules were that? Feeding where she shouldn’t be or letting a human know the secret.
I would have never gave my statement with Sullivan in the room. He seems like a real obnoxious
asshole. Seems like the kind of cop that would let an innocent go to jail as long as he got praise
or credit for catching them.
Where are the Cullens? Where are the wolves? Why aren’t they able to keep Victoria away from them?
A couple of them outside the hotel would stop what is happening, right? It doesn’t make sense.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
8/3/2023 c39 VryUnique
What an exciting story! So much mystery.
I love trying to figure out what the hell is going on with James and Victoria.
We know they are on the outs.
That James left the area, maybe.
That Victoria has been in their rooms and took Bella’s jacket.
So does Victoria want to eat Edward or mate with him?
Edward could be the reason they are on the outs. Maybe when they killed
is parents Victoria saw his picture and became infatuated.
I’m assuming it was Emmett and Rosalie that saved Edward.
What an exciting story! So much mystery.
I love trying to figure out what the hell is going on with James and Victoria.
We know they are on the outs.
That James left the area, maybe.
That Victoria has been in their rooms and took Bella’s jacket.
So does Victoria want to eat Edward or mate with him?
Edward could be the reason they are on the outs. Maybe when they killed
is parents Victoria saw his picture and became infatuated.
I’m assuming it was Emmett and Rosalie that saved Edward.