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7/18/2019 c7 Slayer
please tell me this isnt the end i swear to god please
please tell me this isnt the end i swear to god please
7/18/2019 c5 Slayer
Damb Ben you really were pissed off. though i feel wrong for shipping them since there cousins i gotta say Ben was BADASS in this story.
Damb Ben you really were pissed off. though i feel wrong for shipping them since there cousins i gotta say Ben was BADASS in this story.
5/10/2017 c5 
3Zoommerfish
WAIT WAIT WAIT JUST A MINUTE, WHY didn't Ben go to the Omnitrix, HE ALWAYS goes for the Omnitrix, even in a situation like this.
3ZoommerfishWAIT WAIT WAIT JUST A MINUTE, WHY didn't Ben go to the Omnitrix, HE ALWAYS goes for the Omnitrix, even in a situation like this.
5/3/2017 c7 guest
Pleae continue! I really love this story, it is really well paced. I love your writing style.
Pleae continue! I really love this story, it is really well paced. I love your writing style.
12/9/2016 c5 Guest
You're are going to have to cut back on putting authors notes in the middle of your chapters it takes your readers out of the story.
You're are going to have to cut back on putting authors notes in the middle of your chapters it takes your readers out of the story.
12/2/2016 c7 jasongd
This Is very very good story congratulation I hope you will continue this can't wait for next chapter Bwen Forever
This Is very very good story congratulation I hope you will continue this can't wait for next chapter Bwen Forever
11/9/2016 c7 batgirl13
I really enjoyed it it is perfect I cant wait until you write the next chapter I love bwen!
I really enjoyed it it is perfect I cant wait until you write the next chapter I love bwen!
11/5/2016 c7 batgirl13
New chap must have it
New chap must have it