
7/24/2020 c1 arimamatsui
Sweet
Sweet
1/23/2012 c1
9IdrilSilmarwenEamaneLuinwe
this is good and I'd love to see where you're heading with this please update soon!

this is good and I'd love to see where you're heading with this please update soon!
10/10/2011 c1 NaKita27791
This is a really good story so far, will you please update when you get the chance please =)
This is a really good story so far, will you please update when you get the chance please =)
4/6/2011 c1
3ryu433
whens the next chapter? i want to see where this goes. oh and can you put a line or something in between your scene change? i got confused a bit in reading the chapter.

whens the next chapter? i want to see where this goes. oh and can you put a line or something in between your scene change? i got confused a bit in reading the chapter.
4/22/2009 c1
20MagHal
The sweet stuff is pretty nice
and the closeness is pretty good too
I'd ask for a background check, but that just holds it up lol
can't wait for the next chapters =D

The sweet stuff is pretty nice
and the closeness is pretty good too
I'd ask for a background check, but that just holds it up lol
can't wait for the next chapters =D
4/19/2009 c1
12TheApathyImp
Aw... i think?... lolz, get to the cutesy stuff, please! I love it so far though.

Aw... i think?... lolz, get to the cutesy stuff, please! I love it so far though.
4/18/2009 c1
17griffin blackwood
how can they both be six if hunter is supposed to be older lol! "bent over so delectable...it just wasn't fair." oh crim how you crack me up!

how can they both be six if hunter is supposed to be older lol! "bent over so delectable...it just wasn't fair." oh crim how you crack me up!
4/18/2009 c1
20JasonLeeScottFan
This is looking good! I just wonder how long Hunter will be able to resist just grabbing Dusting and kissing him senseless! PLease update soon!

This is looking good! I just wonder how long Hunter will be able to resist just grabbing Dusting and kissing him senseless! PLease update soon!