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10Rictor Yagami
First thing I want to say is sorry I didn't review this yet as I read this before and was surprised to see it updated. I'm honestly looking forward to the sequal and man I couldn't help but laugh at the conversation Ichigo had with Cazador and Tensa Zangetsu.
I hope that Ishida's plan works since his friends know he will double cross that prick Yhwach and one of the Quincy's I hope join the hero's are Bambietta Basterbine. But it's your story so your call.
I'm glad that both Orihime and Chad are training and getting stronger as they are better like this then how they were in the original manga. But I'm worried for Chad as he will meet up with that piece of shit Kugo Ginjo along with group. I seriously hate Tsukishima as that guy was a real piece of shit. Hope you kill him off in this, unless you have other ideas for him.
I also see that you have published your first book and I will make sure to read it after this review. I was wondering about a few things. For one how do you motivate yourself to pubilsh a book? I've been trying for years to publish one but I can't as I'm afraid of screwing up and I got distracted later on years ago that I could get rich from writing novels.
Second is the website you use, can I get paid publishing a story there? Just curious. Finally I do wonder how to get in touch with the company's that will publish your books for you.
I'm going to check out your story now and I look forward to the sequal to A Protectors Pride.
Good Luck NeoRyu777.
10Rictor YagamiFirst thing I want to say is sorry I didn't review this yet as I read this before and was surprised to see it updated. I'm honestly looking forward to the sequal and man I couldn't help but laugh at the conversation Ichigo had with Cazador and Tensa Zangetsu.
I hope that Ishida's plan works since his friends know he will double cross that prick Yhwach and one of the Quincy's I hope join the hero's are Bambietta Basterbine. But it's your story so your call.
I'm glad that both Orihime and Chad are training and getting stronger as they are better like this then how they were in the original manga. But I'm worried for Chad as he will meet up with that piece of shit Kugo Ginjo along with group. I seriously hate Tsukishima as that guy was a real piece of shit. Hope you kill him off in this, unless you have other ideas for him.
I also see that you have published your first book and I will make sure to read it after this review. I was wondering about a few things. For one how do you motivate yourself to pubilsh a book? I've been trying for years to publish one but I can't as I'm afraid of screwing up and I got distracted later on years ago that I could get rich from writing novels.
Second is the website you use, can I get paid publishing a story there? Just curious. Finally I do wonder how to get in touch with the company's that will publish your books for you.
I'm going to check out your story now and I look forward to the sequal to A Protectors Pride.
Good Luck NeoRyu777.
6/12 c85 GraveCell
this sounds insanely epic, i do hope you start it but if not its cool the protectors pride will always be my favorite bleach fanfic
this sounds insanely epic, i do hope you start it but if not its cool the protectors pride will always be my favorite bleach fanfic
6/10 c85 3Tomyallen
Holy Shit...this was not something on my Bingo Card for 2025.
Congrats on your new novel! I hope it is received well and you get the opportunity to complete the entire series!
Just wanted you to know I have reread A Protectors Pride many many times now. Definitely one of Bleach's better FF. Loved to see your sequel notes...there was some awesome potential there.
All the Best in your future endeavors! And thank you for the great writing.
3TomyallenHoly Shit...this was not something on my Bingo Card for 2025.
Congrats on your new novel! I hope it is received well and you get the opportunity to complete the entire series!
Just wanted you to know I have reread A Protectors Pride many many times now. Definitely one of Bleach's better FF. Loved to see your sequel notes...there was some awesome potential there.
All the Best in your future endeavors! And thank you for the great writing.
5/20 c85 EricaWilliamArt
Wow, this is absolutely incredible. The amount of detail and creativity here really stands out. I can tell you’ve put a lot of thought into everything from the character design and expressions to the overall composition and mood. It’s not just visually striking but also tells a story, which is something I really admire.
The way you’ve captured emotion , movement , and personality in your work is honestly next-level. It’s always inspiring to see creators who are so passionate about what they do. That passion really shows in every line and color choice. Whether this is part of a bigger project or just a standalone idea , it truly deserves more attention. Keep creating and sharing more. This kind of work adds so much to the creative community.
Wow, this is absolutely incredible. The amount of detail and creativity here really stands out. I can tell you’ve put a lot of thought into everything from the character design and expressions to the overall composition and mood. It’s not just visually striking but also tells a story, which is something I really admire.
The way you’ve captured emotion , movement , and personality in your work is honestly next-level. It’s always inspiring to see creators who are so passionate about what they do. That passion really shows in every line and color choice. Whether this is part of a bigger project or just a standalone idea , it truly deserves more attention. Keep creating and sharing more. This kind of work adds so much to the creative community.
5/16 c85 Paradox
Awesome to see you writing again
Awesome to see you writing again
5/15 c85 Inmsodiac
I just read the whole saga again and was blown away again. I love your writing style and just have to take a look at your original work.
I just read the whole saga again and was blown away again. I love your writing style and just have to take a look at your original work.
5/12 c85 Guest
Oh, wow! I would read the ever-loving shit out of that sequel!
Oh, wow! I would read the ever-loving shit out of that sequel!
5/6 c85 1Animal307
Years later, and this is still my favorite Bleach fanfic, especially here on Fanfiction Happy to see a potential sequel to this masterpiece, too. Dont know how you can make Ichigo more OP, in all honesty, but I love the evolution in this first book so I can only eagerly await for what is to come.
Gotta admit that I like how you intend to make the rest of Ichi’s official team OP as well, and am currently wondering what you would do about Tatsuki, Keigo and Mizouiro (spelling?) seeing as they are often left on the wayside. Would be amazing if perhaps Tatsuki or Keigo gets complimentary powers akin to Ichigo, that let them help rescue Ichigo as well. Perhaps one of them get long range, second primarily close range (Obviously Tatsuki) and the final one mid range fighter, enabling them to work together like Harribel’s fracion does to spearhead some of the quincy at least. Doesnt have to be one of the higher ups, either, but perhaps someone like the very first quincy we meet from chapter 1 of Thousand Year Blood War. Meaning one of those that dont have a scrift, but are still relatively powerful enough to show the once regular human’s growth rate over the past two years. Just some idea’s thrown out there for you to contemplate.
Either way, good luck with both the sequel to this, and any other stories you intend to write both on Fanfiction and anywhere else.
Ps: would add emoji’s, but sadly cant because FF wont let me.
1Animal307Years later, and this is still my favorite Bleach fanfic, especially here on Fanfiction Happy to see a potential sequel to this masterpiece, too. Dont know how you can make Ichigo more OP, in all honesty, but I love the evolution in this first book so I can only eagerly await for what is to come.
Gotta admit that I like how you intend to make the rest of Ichi’s official team OP as well, and am currently wondering what you would do about Tatsuki, Keigo and Mizouiro (spelling?) seeing as they are often left on the wayside. Would be amazing if perhaps Tatsuki or Keigo gets complimentary powers akin to Ichigo, that let them help rescue Ichigo as well. Perhaps one of them get long range, second primarily close range (Obviously Tatsuki) and the final one mid range fighter, enabling them to work together like Harribel’s fracion does to spearhead some of the quincy at least. Doesnt have to be one of the higher ups, either, but perhaps someone like the very first quincy we meet from chapter 1 of Thousand Year Blood War. Meaning one of those that dont have a scrift, but are still relatively powerful enough to show the once regular human’s growth rate over the past two years. Just some idea’s thrown out there for you to contemplate.
Either way, good luck with both the sequel to this, and any other stories you intend to write both on Fanfiction and anywhere else.
Ps: would add emoji’s, but sadly cant because FF wont let me.
5/5 c85 Guest
Goddamn that's sounds awesome
Goddamn that's sounds awesome
5/5 c85 3stormcrowley
Thank you for writing! This story was one of the fanfics back in the day that made me suspect works of fan fiction could be as well-written and engaging as an actual published work, so I'm not terribly surprised that you crossed the divide and made your own original work.
Nonetheless, congratulations on writing and completing not just this story, but your original work. That's definitely an accomplishment, almost as much as the life you've made for yourself since this story last had a chapter added. :)
So - thank you very much for sitting down to write this originally, thank you for taking it as far as you did, and finally, I offer my full congratulations and best wishes on your future works. My blessings to you and yours.
3stormcrowleyThank you for writing! This story was one of the fanfics back in the day that made me suspect works of fan fiction could be as well-written and engaging as an actual published work, so I'm not terribly surprised that you crossed the divide and made your own original work.
Nonetheless, congratulations on writing and completing not just this story, but your original work. That's definitely an accomplishment, almost as much as the life you've made for yourself since this story last had a chapter added. :)
So - thank you very much for sitting down to write this originally, thank you for taking it as far as you did, and finally, I offer my full congratulations and best wishes on your future works. My blessings to you and yours.