for A Happy Tomorrow12/25/2010 c1 
3MiaNoir
AAAAAAAH!
that was AMAZING ;D
i love your story!
it´s so beautiful
♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
3MiaNoirAAAAAAAH!
that was AMAZING ;D
i love your story!
it´s so beautiful
♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
11/7/2010 c1 12fantasia-49
oh i love it really and they are so good together! great one really even if it a little short but at least it is finished unlike the tv show
12fantasia-49oh i love it really and they are so good together! great one really even if it a little short but at least it is finished unlike the tv show
10/2/2010 c1 MissParkerFan
wow this story is amazing and sooo cute (:
i love it ♥
wow this story is amazing and sooo cute (:
i love it ♥
3/17/2010 c1 PeculiAr1
That was absolutely great.can u write some more plz ;)
That was absolutely great.can u write some more plz ;)
1/19/2010 c1 6PhenyxArises
Well done! Like the way he bounced between anger and softness (with the flowers) and finally wore down her defenses. Quite plausible!
6PhenyxArisesWell done! Like the way he bounced between anger and softness (with the flowers) and finally wore down her defenses. Quite plausible!
4/30/2009 c1 ack
great job
great job
4/21/2009 c1 Anna
Great oneshot. I love the dialogue between them. I could hear Jarod's and Miss Parker's voices in my head. Hope you'll be writing more.
Great oneshot. I love the dialogue between them. I could hear Jarod's and Miss Parker's voices in my head. Hope you'll be writing more.
4/21/2009 c1 3planet p
The tenses seemed to shift a little - 'has,' and then 'was' - and I'm not really a fan of the Jarod/Miss Parker pairing, but I won't say this was bad, just because of that. It was perhaps a little rushed - which made it a little unbelievable - but it was nice, especially when Miss Parker told Jarod that she'd secretly been in love with him her whole life (and if I'd still been a Jarod/Miss Parker pairing fan, this would have made me so happy), though it was still cute (I'm not a fan but I'm not against Jarod/Miss Parker either, I just like them better as friends).
So, this was nice, and I do like Bollywood too, and I especially like Braveheart Takes the Bride (English translation).
I'll stop rambling now, because I have more important things to do, and I'm sure you have more important things to do. Have a nice day!
3planet pThe tenses seemed to shift a little - 'has,' and then 'was' - and I'm not really a fan of the Jarod/Miss Parker pairing, but I won't say this was bad, just because of that. It was perhaps a little rushed - which made it a little unbelievable - but it was nice, especially when Miss Parker told Jarod that she'd secretly been in love with him her whole life (and if I'd still been a Jarod/Miss Parker pairing fan, this would have made me so happy), though it was still cute (I'm not a fan but I'm not against Jarod/Miss Parker either, I just like them better as friends).
So, this was nice, and I do like Bollywood too, and I especially like Braveheart Takes the Bride (English translation).
I'll stop rambling now, because I have more important things to do, and I'm sure you have more important things to do. Have a nice day!
4/21/2009 c1 42Miss Shannon
Personally I don't like Bollywood movies. But I liked this story! :-)
There were no groundbreaking new ideas in it, but there didn't need to be. I enjoyed a good sweet read. Thank you!
42Miss ShannonPersonally I don't like Bollywood movies. But I liked this story! :-)
There were no groundbreaking new ideas in it, but there didn't need to be. I enjoyed a good sweet read. Thank you!