for Unto the Breach6/26/2009 c4 NotSoSuperGirl
This is a really fantastic story, I am hoping you update quickly. :) Is Edgar going to react badly when he finds out how much Harry had protected him from during their childhood? Update ASAP :)
This is a really fantastic story, I am hoping you update quickly. :) Is Edgar going to react badly when he finds out how much Harry had protected him from during their childhood? Update ASAP :)
6/23/2009 c3 
8MythsterBlack
SORRY... My chapter 4 review was meant for another story entirely. I am not sure how I even made this mistake? It was meant for a story called Nine Lives. (Bugger) I have not yet read this story but I will try not to review this one in someone else s story. LOL
Steve
8MythsterBlackSORRY... My chapter 4 review was meant for another story entirely. I am not sure how I even made this mistake? It was meant for a story called Nine Lives. (Bugger) I have not yet read this story but I will try not to review this one in someone else s story. LOL
Steve
6/23/2009 c4 MythsterBlack
OH, this is good and you really should get back to it.
I'd love to read more about Harry and Sirius killing all the death eaters and how every responds to it. LOL
I particularity like the humor aspects of this.
SO... Please do, get back to this one... OK?
Steve
OH, this is good and you really should get back to it.
I'd love to read more about Harry and Sirius killing all the death eaters and how every responds to it. LOL
I particularity like the humor aspects of this.
SO... Please do, get back to this one... OK?
Steve
6/15/2009 c4 Cateagle
Quite a radically different ending to Harry's second year and one I suspect that's going to have quite the ripple effect down through time. I rather suspect that Dubmles isn't going to appreciate all the effects, either.
Quite a radically different ending to Harry's second year and one I suspect that's going to have quite the ripple effect down through time. I rather suspect that Dubmles isn't going to appreciate all the effects, either.
6/14/2009 c4 MartinDeShade
Very moving. The best Slytherin Harry out there. And frankly after seeing this chapter I think most fanfics should have Ginny dieing in the Chamber. I think the only reason why Rowling kept her alive was to keep the books all fluffy and nice as long as possible.
Very moving. The best Slytherin Harry out there. And frankly after seeing this chapter I think most fanfics should have Ginny dieing in the Chamber. I think the only reason why Rowling kept her alive was to keep the books all fluffy and nice as long as possible.
6/14/2009 c4 10Wonderbee31
Oh...you killed off Ginny in this part? Well, wssn'[t expecting that, but given what happened, it's more fantasy of JKR than what could or should have happened there huh? Glad to see Cedric and the way he stood up there, as well as to see Harry and Eddy make a bit more peace. I also like Harry talking to the Vicar, and interesting to see that, and how things progressed from there on out. With this big change, can't wait to see what third year brings them both.
10Wonderbee31Oh...you killed off Ginny in this part? Well, wssn'[t expecting that, but given what happened, it's more fantasy of JKR than what could or should have happened there huh? Glad to see Cedric and the way he stood up there, as well as to see Harry and Eddy make a bit more peace. I also like Harry talking to the Vicar, and interesting to see that, and how things progressed from there on out. With this big change, can't wait to see what third year brings them both.
6/14/2009 c4 Elyse
Wonderful as always. Please keep updating. I noticed a few spelling and grammatical errors but nothing that really detracted from my enjoyment. Maybe you should consider getting someone to do some light betaing?
Cheers,
Elyse
Wonderful as always. Please keep updating. I noticed a few spelling and grammatical errors but nothing that really detracted from my enjoyment. Maybe you should consider getting someone to do some light betaing?
Cheers,
Elyse
6/14/2009 c4 3Queen Of Cliffhangers
Fantastic bit of writing! Harry and Eddy's reaction to the Weasleys offer to show them around confused me a bit (I think I just need to read it over again), and I didn't see Ginny's death at all! Just brilliant, though...keep it up :)
3Queen Of CliffhangersFantastic bit of writing! Harry and Eddy's reaction to the Weasleys offer to show them around confused me a bit (I think I just need to read it over again), and I didn't see Ginny's death at all! Just brilliant, though...keep it up :)
6/14/2009 c4 darrena
Beautiful chapter! I love the fact that your chapters are so long :) Ginny dying though sad was a nice touch. You write very well, I almost feel like I'm there. I love your Cedric... he's so much more complex. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
Beautiful chapter! I love the fact that your chapters are so long :) Ginny dying though sad was a nice touch. You write very well, I almost feel like I'm there. I love your Cedric... he's so much more complex. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
6/14/2009 c4 1dougal74
Another great chapter...shame about Ginny, not my favourate character but still.
Will Malfoy Sr, be getting his just deserts?
1dougal74Another great chapter...shame about Ginny, not my favourate character but still.
Will Malfoy Sr, be getting his just deserts?
6/14/2009 c2 14Makurayami Ookami
well written. this is awesome. i love it. i'm glad he has some friends as well.
14Makurayami Ookamiwell written. this is awesome. i love it. i'm glad he has some friends as well.