for Unto the Breach4/22/2009 c1 
1silverlasso
Only 1 chapter, and it's already better and more realistic than 99% of "sibling" stories out there. You'd be a fool to discard this. It's awesome...realize this, and write more. :]
1silverlassoOnly 1 chapter, and it's already better and more realistic than 99% of "sibling" stories out there. You'd be a fool to discard this. It's awesome...realize this, and write more. :]
4/22/2009 c1 3Queen Of Cliffhangers
Interesting concept! I'll be keeping up with this one, for sure :)
I'm starting to see you *really* don't like Ron Weasley :P
3Queen Of CliffhangersInteresting concept! I'll be keeping up with this one, for sure :)
I'm starting to see you *really* don't like Ron Weasley :P
4/22/2009 c1 darrena
Brilliant beginning :) I like this story very very much :) Counting the days till the next chapter :) BTW, I'm very happy it was such a long chapter :)
Brilliant beginning :) I like this story very very much :) Counting the days till the next chapter :) BTW, I'm very happy it was such a long chapter :)
4/21/2009 c1 Cateagle
Well, now, that's just plain interesting and the scene of Edgar's sorting a year after should be especially interesting. Meanwhile, it's going to be fascinating to see the ripples and waves that Harry's sorting stirs up. I dare say there's going to be some very interesting reactions among several professors as well as the more bigoted students (like, most of them).
Well, now, that's just plain interesting and the scene of Edgar's sorting a year after should be especially interesting. Meanwhile, it's going to be fascinating to see the ripples and waves that Harry's sorting stirs up. I dare say there's going to be some very interesting reactions among several professors as well as the more bigoted students (like, most of them).
4/21/2009 c1 10Wonderbee31
Nice start here, and good to see a Harry/brother story where the two of them are getting on so well, and will look forward to what may happen with this Slytherin Harry here.
10Wonderbee31Nice start here, and good to see a Harry/brother story where the two of them are getting on so well, and will look forward to what may happen with this Slytherin Harry here.
4/21/2009 c1 25Mikiri's Revenge
This is interesting. But I understand, too many projects, not enough time. Have a good year.
25Mikiri's RevengeThis is interesting. But I understand, too many projects, not enough time. Have a good year.
4/21/2009 c1 4ArgentRoseSableWolf
An interesting start, to be sure. A very different dynamic between Harry and Edgar than most of the 'brother of the BWL' fics. I like that you've defined different areas of strengths for each of them. Sorting Harry into Slytherin always makes me cringe a bit, because too often that means the author intends to do rampant revisionism to Draco and/or Snape, trying to make them credible as decent human beings rather than the scumbags they are, but I'll reserve judgment until we see them 'in action', as it were.
Glad to hear you're working on 'Wyckham Academy' again, I've missed that story.
Wolf
4ArgentRoseSableWolfAn interesting start, to be sure. A very different dynamic between Harry and Edgar than most of the 'brother of the BWL' fics. I like that you've defined different areas of strengths for each of them. Sorting Harry into Slytherin always makes me cringe a bit, because too often that means the author intends to do rampant revisionism to Draco and/or Snape, trying to make them credible as decent human beings rather than the scumbags they are, but I'll reserve judgment until we see them 'in action', as it were.
Glad to hear you're working on 'Wyckham Academy' again, I've missed that story.
Wolf