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4/20/2014 c5 24authorlouise
I will beta for you.
11/25/2012 c5 108Archived.FG97
In all seriousness both this and 'a twist on 03' are amazing. I really hope that you come back to them and finish both because I think it would be such a shame if you didn't. If it is because you want a beta then I would be willing to help, I may not be the best but I'm good at bulking out and storylines. So please consider.

This is seriously good!
1/3/2012 c5 ncisgirl2486
Please update soon! I can not wait to find out what happens! Great story!
11/29/2011 c5 76Left my heart in Paris
i just found this and love it. i know it hasnt been updated in a like two years but i dont care i love this,
9/6/2010 c5 7Stephanie-MS
Heyy im intrested in this story and I would love to help you if it ment you would upsate sooner. Just message me if you want me to help.
6/13/2010 c5 redorchid23
Great Story! Update Please
2/24/2010 c5 Ziva Cahill
1/26/2010 c5 9quibilah
Oh, LOVE it, please update soon. You have very good interactions between everyone, and I love how you are portraying the 'innocence' of Jenny with and when asked about her mother. I love the cliffhanger and am very interested to see where you take it^.^

1/2/2010 c5 28HesMines
Really like this one! lol can't wait to see what happens next!

Not sure what they're going to put on her death certificate lol

Ducky could always say that it was natural causes

Abby could cover it up

Ziva must know ways to kill someone without leaving a trace

...and Gibbs is Gibbs. He's probably the one causing the murder so Jenny doesn't get her hands dirty! lol

Update soonish! HesMines x
12/30/2009 c5 17PayShaFan
I love it. I don't have time to proof read but I will kick you if you take to long if you'd like. :)
12/30/2009 c5 69Pandora of Ithilien
oh hell. i think jenny has even more reason to be ticked off now - she has a brother she didn't know about!
12/30/2009 c5 2Every Teardrop Is A Waterfall
Jenny has a brother? ...half brother? That would annoy her...

Great chapter! Update soonish! x
12/30/2009 c5 12aserene
Oh so that's what she wants...hm...I love the autopsy trip! And Abby, just perfect!

Don't suppose this might be a subtle Jibbs undertone eventually.

I could beta for you if you need one.
12/30/2009 c5 131NCISgirl1527
Okay I can't decide who is going to kill her first:


Gibbs for Jenny

Ziva for Jenny

Abby for Jenny

Tony for Ziva for Jenny

You get the point :-)

Great story and great chapter. I hope you post again soon. :-)

I loved that Abby doesn't like people who hurt mommy bit.

Paris Never Ended

12/29/2009 c5 7chelseabelle
I love this. I cant wait to read more.
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