8/16/2010 c6 21EvelynWn
This is a great story! I hope you update soon. I'd really like for you to continue it.
This is a great story! I hope you update soon. I'd really like for you to continue it.
5/28/2009 c5 ihearttheo.c
I love this story. It's so cute and creative! I can't wait to see what you do next.
I love this story. It's so cute and creative! I can't wait to see what you do next.
5/20/2009 c5 LemonLime165
omg!
lol i love it!
absoltivly posulutly the best chapter ever lol
poor lily...he drove her insane lol
omg!
lol i love it!
absoltivly posulutly the best chapter ever lol
poor lily...he drove her insane lol
5/16/2009 c5 2newclassic
Oh, this story is really cute. I like how not every chapter is the same, and it focuses on each emotion. There are a few grammatical and spelling mistakes, but they can be easily fixed.
update soon!
~em
Oh, this story is really cute. I like how not every chapter is the same, and it focuses on each emotion. There are a few grammatical and spelling mistakes, but they can be easily fixed.
update soon!
~em
4/24/2009 c1 12Une Rose
i like this idea, but i found a few mistakes. grammar wise, you could improve a bit. there were some misplaced commas there (i have a thing about commas... i like them, a lot XD)
and you worte 'Hogs Mede' i think is supposed to be Hogsmead...
anyways, i am looking forward to reading more of this!
i like this idea, but i found a few mistakes. grammar wise, you could improve a bit. there were some misplaced commas there (i have a thing about commas... i like them, a lot XD)
and you worte 'Hogs Mede' i think is supposed to be Hogsmead...
anyways, i am looking forward to reading more of this!