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8/16/2009 c13 352Major Mike Powell III
Well, well, soldier...

Hoo-rrah! 50ยบ review, btches!

Now...THIS was interesting!

FINALLY! Yunsung bites the dust! LOL

And phew! I thought that you'd take Mina out for a moment there. LMAO Glad that didn't happen.

And...nope. No idea what you mean in your A/N. ROFL

And that final scene was...well, very intriguing though kinda creepy. ROFLMAO

Still, nice work, marine! Keep it up!

Update ASAP! That's an order!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!
8/16/2009 c13 549yellow 14
Nothing wrong with the Aliens feel, it seems to fit. Keep updating
8/16/2009 c13 Monotonously-Sporadic

I never liked Yunseung, but damn, what a way to go...

Loved this chapter as much as I thought I would! I expected Hwang to die, I did not expect him to go out like a hero. That kinda dissapoints me, because Hwang was a $$


That's important because demons are lactose-intolerant, heheheh.

Don't be surprised if you feel yourself losing intellect reading this review.

Update soon!
8/2/2009 c12 Monotonously-Sporadic

So Yunseung is a seven-foot jackal-hawk... you know, I kinda' figured...

Aside from that, I gotta wonder, was it Soul Calibur that Talim felt was chasing her at her side, or was it our favorite (and possessed) ninja?

And why is Hwang such an idiot? Yo don't break Seung-Mina's halberd and come out unscathed!

All in all, a pretty good update, and something tells me it's only gonna get better from here!


...you know, in retrospect, it's probably BECAUSE of champagne and p.c.p. that I can't normally read a chapter in one sitting...

...or maybe it's because I have A.D.D...

...or maybe it's maybeline...

...hmm. Anywayser, I'll go ponder this thought while you go write more story!

8/2/2009 c12 11arashi-enkou
These chapters keep getting better and better. I love how Talim, Hong, and Mina interact together. And Mina ordering Hong around is just...just so *Mina*. Your characters are just so...full of life! I love it. :3

As for Hong turning into that Bad Ass Gatekeeper...


Can't wait for the next chapter~!

Also, thanks for answering my question~. X3
8/2/2009 c12 352Major Mike Powell III
Well, well, soldier...

Now, maybe I didn't get here first, but I got here before Arashi. LOL

Now, this was interesting!

I totally went LOL at Mina spankin' Kamala.




Well, maybe more than LOL.


Damn! Mina kicked (a)ss! LMAO

And that douche Hwang got DESTROYED! ROFL Yeah, too bad Mina didn't have a knife or somethin' sharp with'er. ROFL

And you can't fight on an empty stomach!

And then...whoa! Now, THAT transformation, I was NOT expecting! ROFLMAO

Talim VS Gatekeeper


Update ASAP! That's an order!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!
8/2/2009 c12 549yellow 14
Do not annoy Mina, her vengeance is a terrible thing to behold. Very good, keep updating.
7/23/2009 c11 Monotonously-Sporadic



I... I'm at a loss for words I... I seriously don't know what to say...

... other than


This story is so amazing I cannot think of anything random and/or funny to say


You're story is that good. It takes away my randomocity. And that's not fair!

I especially like the pairing. I never pictured Taki and Talim, but now that I have, I really like the pairing.

My suggestion to you, and I can't believe I'm about to say this, make your story a little worse okay? Please? For me? I have to be as random as possible, but I can't do that with writing this good!

But seriously, keep on keepin' on, and don't change a thing.

I'm gonna go try and be random somewhere away from this blessing to literature.

This is Mono-Spor signin' off!

Ya'll update soon now, ya hear?
7/21/2009 c11 11arashi-enkou
Best chapter yet~! The beginning was sensual and dark, and a a very big difference from the first love scene. Sort of like a metaphor for their relationship, if that makes any sort of sense. XD;;

Now, we finally meet Mina in the flesh! She's very well written, just as funny (and violent, apparently!) as she is on the game. Her interactions with Talim are just so cute~!

Hong is slowly becoming a favorite character because of your writing!

Also, Hwang seems like a royal douchebag. But his line at Talim was /priceless/. XD Poor Talim, always being confused for such a youngster~

As for Talim's connection with Alun, that's a brilliant element to add! It's another supernatural element that just /fits/ so well~! And I'm probably asking a stupid question, but exactly what type of owl is Alun anyway? Just a question from an owl fan. XD;

And yes, Talim's third costume did remind me of a nun on the wild side. XD

All in all, a great chapter!
7/19/2009 c11 352Major Mike Powell III
Well, well, soldier...

This was interesting!

Now, the start was N-I-CE!


Until the whole choking thing. That was nasty. ^^U

That douche Hwang got PWN3D! LOL What a bastard.

And those students got PWN3D!, too. LMAO Dumb(a)sses.

And so, the 3 are on their way to another place to fight. Interesting.

Too bad Taki didn't take the douche's soul. THAT woulda been nice. ROFL

So, nice work so far, marine. Keep it up.

Update ASAP! That's an order!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!
7/19/2009 c11 549yellow 14
A very good chapter. Hwang certainly got what he deserved. Keep updating
7/9/2009 c10 yellow 14
Nice cliffy. Keep updating
7/9/2009 c10 352Major Mike Powell III
Well, well, soldier...

This was interesting.

Man, that Kamala chick sounds like a real btch. LOL

That blade dancing performance was sweet, beautifully described. Nice.

And now, uh oh, Taki's in da house! LMAO I smell an AW3SOME! kick-(a)ss battle comin' up!

Nice work, marine! Keep it up!

Update ASAP! That's an order!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!
7/9/2009 c10 11arashi-enkou
hoho god, your Yunseong, he is love 3. He's written so well! Seriously, where were you when Namco drew up his character?

I must say, this chapter was amazing. I think you scared us all when Talim fell off the cliff. Breathed a sigh of relief when the tiny dancer came into play. You can't spell Talim without Tiny. XD

The ending scene was heartwarming and funny and I loved it. Can't wait for the next chapter!
6/29/2009 c9 4TacoKing23
Well, I must declare, this story is pretty much amazing so far. I eagerly look forward to reading more.
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