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6/5/2009 c6 352Major Mike Powell III
Well, well, soldier...

This was interesting.

A nice start, Talim wantin' to be alone with Taki. It made me go LOL.

They got shot at. Damn, so much for a quiet ride. LMAO

And Taki opened her heart up to Talim.

Hm...nope, I didn't shed a tear.

Not even with music.

Now, just don't think I'm one cold bastard for this.

Anyway.

Nice work, marine. Keep it up.

Update ASAP! That's an order!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!
6/5/2009 c6 549yellow 14
An interesting insight into why Taki's the way she is. Keep updating
5/31/2009 c5 Rain54
Quite a lot of things going on in this chapter. The details of their environment were vividly painted that it's easy to imagine such lush and beautiful area. Good thing there's more conversation this time, and Talim grew surprisingly brazen in such a short time. Hong/Taki encounter in the waterfall was unexpected but seems more real having it happened. As for Talim/Taki it's refreshing to not have to read all the details, you did it just right :) One minor thing, I thought Sophitia's last name is Alexandra and not Alexander.

I enjoyed seeing how the characters revealed more about themselves to each other (especially Taki) although it remains to be seen whether her act was true or just part of her plan. Hm handkerchief? Angst is always welcomed and had been implied in this chapter too. Look forward for the next one!
5/31/2009 c4 Rain54
I enjoyed the interaction of all three characters. Hong might sound somewhat too mature (almost paralleling Taki's at some point)but overall it's not a big concern. Taki/Kali is original, I must say and the description's befitting. On to the next chapter!
5/28/2009 c5 11arashi-enkou
WOW.

Just, just wow.

This story is just so well-written, so beautifully worded, that I can manage to overlook the oddness of the Taki/Talim pairing. The age-gap between them makes me a bit squeamish, but your writing style is just so brilliant that I'm enjoying the pairing, in a way.

And each character stays true to theirselves, while somehow flaring into a completely original person. It takes true talent to do something like that.

Speaking of characters, you've written Hong in a way that makes me chuckle, rather than facepalm. Where were you when Namco was writing him? XDD

Final tidbit before I stfu: the dream sequence was so overwhelming in all the best ways. It was richly detailed and overflowing with this sense of beauty, yet it didn't hamper the story's progress.

Agh, I can't manage to write a proper review, I'm so blown away. XD
5/28/2009 c5 549yellow 14
A very good chapter. A little close to the edge there with the bathing scene, but not to far. Keep updating
5/28/2009 c5 352Major Mike Powell III
Well, well, soldier...

Hoo-rrah! First review, btches!

Now...THIS...was...AW3SOME!

EXCEPT! for the Hong/Taki moment. THAT sucked.

But the rest was PURE W-I-N! LOL

Tons of very stylish fanservice and heavy Taki/Talim-ness. That's just A-W-3-SOME! LMAO

ONLY bad thing: the ending was kinda angsty. And angst is my sworn enemy.

But still, it was AW3SOME!

Gettin' the hankerchiefs ready? Pah! I'm inmune to that stuff. ROFL

So, nice, VERY nice work, son. Keep it up.

Update ASAP! That's an order!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!
5/28/2009 c5 AlreadyMovedOn
Good.
5/21/2009 c4 549yellow 14
It is a little ooc, but with good reason though. Keep updating.
5/20/2009 c4 352Major Mike Powell III
Well, well, soldier...

Hoo-rrah! First review, btches!

Now, this was interesting.

I found the interaction between Taki and Hong hilarious. LOL

Nice picture there, with Taki standing tall under the moonlight...sweet!

Talim drinkin' to prove she ain't a kid? LMAO Nice.

And some Taki/Talim cuddling. N-I-CE!

And whoa, now THAT'S what I call one freak-arse dream! ROFL

And...well...the Talim/Hong stuff was kinda hard to swallow.

But still, this was pretty damn good.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Update ASAP! That's an order!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!
5/18/2009 c3 Rain54
Good development on the story and this chapter feels somewhat poignant, with both women touching the subject of Taki's older self. Very well thought on their respective part,but especially the way Talim analyzing Taki's action afterwards. Their friendly banter was a good way to bring up Taki's past and explaining the gates system. Hope you'll update this one soon!
5/16/2009 c3 549yellow 14
A very interesting fic. I'm curious to see where this leads. Keep updating.
5/13/2009 c3 352Major Mike Powell III
Well, well, soldier...

Hoo-rrah! First review, btches!

Now, THIS...was...N-I-Ce!

Some semi-fanservice from Taki in her underwear. LOL HAWT!

Talim in the Wind Dance was B-E-A-Utiful! And the way she treated Dream Taki was interesting.

A lot of walkin', eh? LMAO

And...(Sigh) That idiot Yunsung showed up...meh.

But even if he's in here, he stands NO chance in HELL against Taki. ROFL

So, nice work, marine. Keep it up.

Update ASAP! That's an order!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!
5/7/2009 c2 Rain54
Yes it was rather short but I still enjoyed reading this chapter. Didn't expect Sophitia to be defeated rather easily lol. That was rather cunning for Taki, albeit appropriately. I wonder what Sophitia meant when she said Taki was more than friend to her ;)

Taki as a piper,interesting. Now that Talim's the one who apparently will stop Taki it should be interesting to see if she will help Taki through the battle or will hinder her. As always, look fwd for part three. Wonder who'll guard second gate hopefully they can put up more fight.
5/4/2009 c2 Major Mike Powell III
Well, well, soldier...

Hoo-rrah! First review, btches!

This was interesting.

Ouch! Poor Sophie...but yay! They were more than friends! N-I-Ce! LOL

And it's up to Talim to stop Taki now. Let's hope she can make her way into her heart, eh?

Nice work, marine. Keep it up.

Update ASAP! That's an order!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!
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