for The Cullens In Konoha6/15/2010 c3 
2Vaenz
Ahah, its so~ good guys! I love it~~~ please write more...:} Dem, you tell T to start writing again...or else xD
2VaenzAhah, its so~ good guys! I love it~~~ please write more...:} Dem, you tell T to start writing again...or else xD
2/27/2010 c3 naruhina fan
ROFLMAO! This is so freakin' funny! Poor Sasuke, though... I hope everything works out in the end. Also, will there be another pairing? Naruhina maybe? XD Update soon, plz.
P.S.
If you want to know my nickname at least, it's Bart. As in Bart Simpson, minus the Simpson.
ROFLMAO! This is so freakin' funny! Poor Sasuke, though... I hope everything works out in the end. Also, will there be another pairing? Naruhina maybe? XD Update soon, plz.
P.S.
If you want to know my nickname at least, it's Bart. As in Bart Simpson, minus the Simpson.
12/13/2009 c3 5Alicia of the Temptation
This...haha...is...haha...so...freaking...haha...Funny! HAHAHAAHAHAA! "What in the ducks who screech at people is that?" HAHAHAHA! I laughed and read that line over forty times. Where did you come up with that? Oh, and I have a question, will all the pairings be right? Ya' know, Jacob w/ Nessie, SasuSaku, etc. You should continue this!
5Alicia of the TemptationThis...haha...is...haha...so...freaking...haha...Funny! HAHAHAAHAHAA! "What in the ducks who screech at people is that?" HAHAHAHA! I laughed and read that line over forty times. Where did you come up with that? Oh, and I have a question, will all the pairings be right? Ya' know, Jacob w/ Nessie, SasuSaku, etc. You should continue this!
11/28/2009 c3 5Sakiq-Sakik
wow. O.O this sounds REALLY interesting already!
good luck with thew rest! ^_^
5Sakiq-Sakikwow. O.O this sounds REALLY interesting already!
good luck with thew rest! ^_^
8/11/2009 c3 Kay-chan of the Leaf
This is an awesome story! keep it up~!
I do have one question... from here:
“I’m hungry,” muttered Jacob, patting his growling stomach somewhat affectionately, murmuring unintelligible sweet phrases to it.
To Jakes POV, who's POV is it?
This is an awesome story! keep it up~!
I do have one question... from here:
“I’m hungry,” muttered Jacob, patting his growling stomach somewhat affectionately, murmuring unintelligible sweet phrases to it.
To Jakes POV, who's POV is it?