for A Flash of Red8/3/2020 c1 Guest
I loved it
I loved it
7/16/2017 c1 
5LynnHF
I like the part where in the being he was like maybe I will do that. And then I like a few of the other parts. You are pretty good )
5LynnHFI like the part where in the being he was like maybe I will do that. And then I like a few of the other parts. You are pretty good )
7/4/2017 c1 Angel
WOW! Awesome and yuki and kaname in love!
WOW! Awesome and yuki and kaname in love!
6/2/2016 c1 Leah
I liked it how you made a new position
I liked it how you made a new position
12/13/2015 c1 Guest
That was excellent.
That was excellent.
12/8/2015 c1 Dovahkiin101
The first one was much better but I still liked this one. I was kind of glad that it was shorter so no one could catch them. I almost wished for zero to catch them though. THAT would have been embarrassing. XD
The first one was much better but I still liked this one. I was kind of glad that it was shorter so no one could catch them. I almost wished for zero to catch them though. THAT would have been embarrassing. XD
7/30/2015 c1 good
Everything was good until the end... I thought the end could use a twist. Otherwise it was pretty good
Everything was good until the end... I thought the end could use a twist. Otherwise it was pretty good
7/22/2015 c1 Guest
This was awsome you are a verry talented author im not gonna tell you my exact age but i will say that i am quite young and i know i shouldnt be reading stuff like this but i an and i would rate this a 11 out of 10 !
This was awsome you are a verry talented author im not gonna tell you my exact age but i will say that i am quite young and i know i shouldnt be reading stuff like this but i an and i would rate this a 11 out of 10 !
7/2/2015 c1 Guest
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2/5/2015 c1 Guest
AAAAHHHH so kyut omg PLS make more pleeeaaaasssseee
AAAAHHHH so kyut omg PLS make more pleeeaaaasssseee
11/25/2014 c1 Guest
so good and I am really happy thank you for making story is "AWESOME, and SEXY, and YOU KNOW IT".
so good and I am really happy thank you for making story is "AWESOME, and SEXY, and YOU KNOW IT".
8/15/2014 c1 someone 3
it was awesome! I loved it really made me laugh at parts. :3 :) nice job (y)
it was awesome! I loved it really made me laugh at parts. :3 :) nice job (y)
7/1/2014 c1 Guest
1000
1000