for Choices10/24/2015 c5 Guest
Tasks I did it asome!
Tasks I did it asome!
10/24/2015 c4 Guest
Dun dun dun...
Dun dun dun...
4/19/2013 c9 
7SkyeTai And Ic3
SkyeTai here- im a really big fan of u! i 100 WHOA. i i reaoly want to be in a story of yours! i love ya BRAIN
7SkyeTai And Ic3SkyeTai here- im a really big fan of u! i 100 WHOA. i i reaoly want to be in a story of yours! i love ya BRAIN
12/26/2011 c8 Curlscat
Your dialogue skill has improved a lot now, too. It's a lot more flowing and realistic.
I remember this...
My reviews are getting shorter. I don't know if that's good or bad...
Your dialogue skill has improved a lot now, too. It's a lot more flowing and realistic.
I remember this...
My reviews are getting shorter. I don't know if that's good or bad...
12/26/2011 c7 Curlscat
First sentence is awkwardly phrased, this chapter.
What was in the room with Puck? A zombie?
Your sections are separated by nothing but exclamation points. Why?
""Why need to try to sneak past it." Sabrina said, peeking over the counter and suppressing a cry." - we,not why.
I hope you're finding this useful. Dunno if you're going to edit, but if you will, this might make it easier.
First sentence is awkwardly phrased, this chapter.
What was in the room with Puck? A zombie?
Your sections are separated by nothing but exclamation points. Why?
""Why need to try to sneak past it." Sabrina said, peeking over the counter and suppressing a cry." - we,not why.
I hope you're finding this useful. Dunno if you're going to edit, but if you will, this might make it easier.