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6/23/2009 c3 mynameisally
OMFGJH! I H8 U! JK...I COULD NVR H8 U...BUT IM STIL MAD :l
6/23/2009 c3 3Culpeo Fox
OMG!

I teared up while reading the card again. I can't get enough of it. Love Emmett's gift... if only he knew... if only he knew! lol.

My pen name doesn't show up very well on anything cause of all the dots. Ugh... so you kind of have to space em out. like . for . you. anything . Cause I guess FanFic thinks it's some kind of spam thing. Whatevs.

Love the chapter, Renesmee throwing up on (Jacob's) shoes was hilarious, I had to read it twice.

Luvers you bunched Nessie!

-Alice-
6/13/2009 c2 2nfanpepsi
MORE! MORE MORE! PLease I like it so far! YOU NEED TO UPDATE SO WE CAN READ MORE!
6/12/2009 c1 4hallowsbeforehorcruxes
i favorited! now u can update!
6/12/2009 c1 10Angelmuse
This chapter is so sweet...Nessie comes across as a very fun-loving person. She's very down-to-earth, too. She sees her life as being, well, just the way things are for vampires.

I especially like her innocence and obvious love for her family.

I'm curious to see what comes next. Keep writing!
5/24/2009 c2 4hallowsbeforehorcruxes
HIT! for sure! this story is AMAZING! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! LIKE NOW!
5/23/2009 c2 mynameisally
OMFG ITS DA BESTEST STORY EVER ;P

ALICE ;D
5/22/2009 c2 emmett4862
AWESOME though dont use like 5 minutes later or anano second later try like a few seconds or a few minutes you dont have to be exact all the time
5/22/2009 c2 3Culpeo Fox
OMFG!

Nessie, that was freaken awsome! LOVEE IT! Hott to... yess... with 2 't's. lol. ;)

OMFGx2

I get another teddy! Yess! Emmett won't be alone any longer! I'll call it Nessie. and they will get into so much trouble together. Lol.

Anyways. Cannot wait for the next chapter hun! I want more! NOW! DO IT! HURRY UP!

Alice :)

P.S - R.I.P Daddy's Little Cannonball.
5/22/2009 c2 1theres only him
wow that was really good ness long flashback and you should have a flashback on how you told me and alice!

love you,

your biggest fan

aunt rosalie
5/19/2009 c1 emmett4862
hey its emmy! i created an account. nessie told me that you guys are working on a story and i think its great so far!
5/18/2009 c1 3Culpeo Fox
I like how at the end Renesmee is all like;

'Then my mom and dad got married, went to Esme's Island, where pillows, headboards and my mom's nightgown got ruined.'

Like it was just another ordinary day. Cause we all know that biting pillows, scratching up headboards and ripping up your wife's nightgown is all normal... Right Edward? ;D

But can I get a hug from Jasper? Cause Jasper is so sexy! And Jacob, to be honest, if there were more werewolves in the world, it'll be their fault that global warming is continuing. Since they are so hott! xD Yeah... umm.

Good to see that you got a story out finally to! Now it feels like you really are an active member of the FanFiction world hey?

BTW, your review to muh story made me laugh so much. It's a shame that #3 & 4 fan are not friends anymore... but #2 is right? I gotta go and tell peeps about this small story right now, definatly a hit. The title seems like it's gonna hint something big right? Can't wait till it gets started!

Holy gajeeberz this was a long review...

Anyways... Can't wait to read more! Seriously! I think we would be like that fan swap thing... where you are #1 fan for my story, and I am like #1 fan of your story... lol. :D

I will wait as patiently as possible for the first chapter... I wonder if there will be any Edward & Bella vs. Jacob & Renesmee in the whole dating issue. Of course Bella would prob. be all like, but they are so cute together. And then Edward would try to object, but we all know how he can't say no to Bella. I mean, that's Renesmee came along. OMFG! Idea for your story. Just a small snippit.

Renesmee should be asking about her parents past, and what their honymoon was like, cause you know, she wants to know, just cause it's Renesmee. And then Bella can say that she was a stubborn humana and that Edward couldn't say no to her like ever. And umm... Emmett could be walking by or something (cause we all know that this is something Emmett would say) And he could be all like "Yeah, with your mom's stubborness, and your with your dad having practically no will power to say no to her cause your mom used to be able to cry and manipulate your dad, that's how you were made. And then some pillows and headboard and a few night gowns had to be sacraficed." And then Emmett smiles and walks away. xD

Well... yeah... there is my review. Look at all that you got for this little prologue. Amazing isn't it. lol.

well... TTYL.

Alice ;)
5/2/2009 c1 1theres only him
omec! thats like really good nessie
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