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32CarlileLovesAnime
Aw! I absolutely love the ending!
Thank you, fellow Chase/Maya fan. (:
There were a few grammatical errors, but it got better toward the end. You portrayed the characters well, and the plot is just so darn cute!
Please write more Harvest Moon stuff. C3
32CarlileLovesAnimeAw! I absolutely love the ending!
Thank you, fellow Chase/Maya fan. (:
There were a few grammatical errors, but it got better toward the end. You portrayed the characters well, and the plot is just so darn cute!
Please write more Harvest Moon stuff. C3
5/8/2009 c1 xXxHatsune MikuxXx
Lulz~ Chase and Maya are my favorite couple in Harvest Moon Tree of Tranqility. Once I got the game I did all their rival events first. xD
Lulz~ Chase and Maya are my favorite couple in Harvest Moon Tree of Tranqility. Once I got the game I did all their rival events first. xD
5/8/2009 c1 2lucanogilove
Yay~ Another person who likes ChasexMaya, you have awesome writing skills. Can't wait to read more from you3
2lucanogiloveYay~ Another person who likes ChasexMaya, you have awesome writing skills. Can't wait to read more from you3
5/5/2009 c1 16Curimuch
Oh my goodness you are wonderful for writing a Chase/Maya story.
Though there was weird descriptions now and then. like ' a couple of house later' and 'tasting tone of'?
And instead of her falling on top of him, perhaps he can catch her instead? It's less eye rolling than falling entirely ontop of the person lol
But the story was good over-all. Good job on writing Chase/Maya and writing Maya perfectly.
16CurimuchOh my goodness you are wonderful for writing a Chase/Maya story.
Though there was weird descriptions now and then. like ' a couple of house later' and 'tasting tone of'?
And instead of her falling on top of him, perhaps he can catch her instead? It's less eye rolling than falling entirely ontop of the person lol
But the story was good over-all. Good job on writing Chase/Maya and writing Maya perfectly.