for The Mark6/11/2009 c8 NEVERUSINGTHISOLDTHINGAGAIN
They're home! :D
YAYZ!
O the ninja turtles and the 2 masters are left!
Can't wait to see what happens next!
From: Seeker-Of-The-Heart
They're home! :D
YAYZ!
O the ninja turtles and the 2 masters are left!
Can't wait to see what happens next!
From: Seeker-Of-The-Heart
6/10/2009 c8 
1Dark-Rose Karma
Yay! Thanks to Leo, the others made it! I wonder if they'll be mad at him for leaving. Hm...
1Dark-Rose KarmaYay! Thanks to Leo, the others made it! I wonder if they'll be mad at him for leaving. Hm...
6/6/2009 c7 NEVERUSINGTHISOLDTHINGAGAIN
Coolz
GO LEO!
XD
I say HAHA to the tribunal! HAHA XD
Lolz... Anyway... good chap!
From: Seeker-Of-The-Heart
Coolz
GO LEO!
XD
I say HAHA to the tribunal! HAHA XD
Lolz... Anyway... good chap!
From: Seeker-Of-The-Heart
6/5/2009 c6 203BubblyShell22
Wow! What an awesome story so far. You do have some spelling errors. Here are the spellings in the correct way: Artifact, Chikara, Farahji. Also, when new people are speaking you must create a new paragraph. An example:
"What must I do?" murmured Leo.
"You must find a way to survive and stop your brothers from confronting the Shredder...," said Mizu. I used the elippses rather than write the rest of the words. You should also use punctuation when there are questions and the like. Other than these little mistakes, your writing is very good. Keep up the good work.
The Bubbly One,
Shell
203BubblyShell22Wow! What an awesome story so far. You do have some spelling errors. Here are the spellings in the correct way: Artifact, Chikara, Farahji. Also, when new people are speaking you must create a new paragraph. An example:
"What must I do?" murmured Leo.
"You must find a way to survive and stop your brothers from confronting the Shredder...," said Mizu. I used the elippses rather than write the rest of the words. You should also use punctuation when there are questions and the like. Other than these little mistakes, your writing is very good. Keep up the good work.
The Bubbly One,
Shell
6/5/2009 c6 NEVERUSINGTHISOLDTHINGAGAIN
AWESOME XD
I like where thiz iz goingz!
Chappy 7 haz to come soon!
And i will definitely read itz!
From: Seeker-Of-The-Heart
AWESOME XD
I like where thiz iz goingz!
Chappy 7 haz to come soon!
And i will definitely read itz!
From: Seeker-Of-The-Heart
6/2/2009 c5 2MissGalactica
This is such a good story i really hope you update soon! this story is going to my alert favs!
2MissGalacticaThis is such a good story i really hope you update soon! this story is going to my alert favs!
6/1/2009 c5 NEVERUSINGTHISOLDTHINGAGAIN
Good good Good good Good good
GOOD XD
Next chap better be coming soon! XD
From: Seeker-Of-The-Heart
Good good Good good Good good
GOOD XD
Next chap better be coming soon! XD
From: Seeker-Of-The-Heart
5/27/2009 c4 Dark-Rose Karma
A new attitute for Leo? That's not good. Especially when everyone is starting to get suspicious. What will happen next?
A new attitute for Leo? That's not good. Especially when everyone is starting to get suspicious. What will happen next?
5/26/2009 c4 NEVERUSINGTHISOLDTHINGAGAIN
GREAT :D
Can't wait for the next chapter.
:D :P :D :P
From: Seeker-Of-The-Heart
GREAT :D
Can't wait for the next chapter.
:D :P :D :P
From: Seeker-Of-The-Heart
5/18/2009 c3 Dark-Rose Karma
This story gets more mysterious every chapter. So, the five dragons Leo met represented the five elements and Leo's tattoo is the mark of the Dragon Master?
Please continue soon. This is a good story so far. ^_^
This story gets more mysterious every chapter. So, the five dragons Leo met represented the five elements and Leo's tattoo is the mark of the Dragon Master?
Please continue soon. This is a good story so far. ^_^