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3SaphirWereTigrss
Wow I thought I was the only one with enough spare time (no offence) to actually register that the trinity all have black hair and blue eyes!
3SaphirWereTigrssWow I thought I was the only one with enough spare time (no offence) to actually register that the trinity all have black hair and blue eyes!
5/16/2010 c4 7Lolchen
I love it! Got so many laughs out of this, I can't count them... love the last chapter especially, 'cause I love Nightwing. Now he's jumping down that roof... lol. Liked that pun-thingie best. Anyway, what's up with Question and foiled windows?
Lolchen
7LolchenI love it! Got so many laughs out of this, I can't count them... love the last chapter especially, 'cause I love Nightwing. Now he's jumping down that roof... lol. Liked that pun-thingie best. Anyway, what's up with Question and foiled windows?
Lolchen
2/9/2010 c4 karonkgb
No wonder Nightwing jumped off the roof! For my part I would slug Hawkgirl right in the jaw-if I was a super hero and not a 59 year old woman. But, I can stare real hard.
No wonder Nightwing jumped off the roof! For my part I would slug Hawkgirl right in the jaw-if I was a super hero and not a 59 year old woman. But, I can stare real hard.
9/27/2009 c4 Saphimire
E~ I really like your stories. :3
E~ I really like your stories. :3
7/20/2009 c1 59Spawn Guy
Wow, haven't written a reveiw for somethign not Spectacular Spider-Man in...bleh. Not important.
Loved it. Just the absurdidty (obviously) and the overall defineing strenghts of the characters. For just four chapters, one not origonally going to be included, this feels like a novel in how well the characters stand out. And I love the idea of loop time.
What else to say. Um...you do love the italics a little too much. Emphasis is great, and you use it well, it just seems like evry third sentance there's something someone desprately has to emphasise to someone else and then hat person has to turn to the person next to them and...I'm exagerating, sure, but it's kind of there. Dosen't detract anything. Great stuff.
59Spawn GuyWow, haven't written a reveiw for somethign not Spectacular Spider-Man in...bleh. Not important.
Loved it. Just the absurdidty (obviously) and the overall defineing strenghts of the characters. For just four chapters, one not origonally going to be included, this feels like a novel in how well the characters stand out. And I love the idea of loop time.
What else to say. Um...you do love the italics a little too much. Emphasis is great, and you use it well, it just seems like evry third sentance there's something someone desprately has to emphasise to someone else and then hat person has to turn to the person next to them and...I'm exagerating, sure, but it's kind of there. Dosen't detract anything. Great stuff.
7/8/2009 c3 9Darth Muad-dib
Okay, the first two chapters were pretty good. I read them and thought to myself "this aint so bad." Then I got to chapter 3 and could not stop laughing when I got what Batman was afraid off. As i type this I'm still laughing at that and the fact that Hawkgirl cant seem to open a door.
This is by far the best JL fanfic I've read so keep up the great work. i cant wait to read more of this.
9Darth Muad-dibOkay, the first two chapters were pretty good. I read them and thought to myself "this aint so bad." Then I got to chapter 3 and could not stop laughing when I got what Batman was afraid off. As i type this I'm still laughing at that and the fact that Hawkgirl cant seem to open a door.
This is by far the best JL fanfic I've read so keep up the great work. i cant wait to read more of this.
7/7/2009 c4 3DeletedAccountKCS
*squee can be heard in the next universe* I was SO SO ridiculously excited when I saw the alert for this in my inbox. :D
Poor Bruce, I admit even after the whole fiasco I did feel sorry for him at the beginning of the chapter. After all, it was logical, and like he said he does look at worst-case scenarios.
And it's very interesting to me that he would think that Clark coming after him would be worse than J'onn - I get the vibe from their conversation, that he thinks it would be worse because Superman would never forgive himself, NOT because he couldn't handle Superman if the need arose (which he already demonstrated that he *could*) and would be scared of him. He was protecting both of them, actually.
And on that topic, their conversation was so perfect - I think it's a mark of a truly deep friendship where one word of "sorry" and "forgiven" can encompass anything and everything, without demanding more from each side. *much approval* And then they can just sit back to watch the fireworks, the matter dropping to never be brought up again (hopefully).
*giggle* Somehow I'm glad Batman wasn't gifted with super-hearing. Not sure anyone on the Watchtower would really be safe from surveillance. ^^
Well, at least Dick can probably go down in that history as being the only person to make Shayera blush and APOLOGIZE for something. :) I'm glad you added that little interlude - it was too cute. Poor Hawkgirl, but I love how you portray Dick Grayson, rebounding from anything after time. That's why I'm a firm believer that no matter what happened, he never would hate Bruce - he's too easygoing and too Good, as Shayera said, to hold a grudge for long.
And I adored the conversation between Dick and Bruce, btw. *snicker* Dick's cheerful acceptance of Bruce's more-than-occasional self-centeredness, and then his wariness as soon as Bruce gets all emotional - and then asking if Clark put him up to it. ROTFL.
Lastly I also love how everyone in that entire animated universe is always like 'It's the QUESTION, and he's NUTS, so what are you worried about?' Heehee. He'd better hang onto Helena, that's all I've got to say.
Wonderful story, and I am SO glad that you put this last chapter up! It made my weekend - so thank you!
*scurries off to read new other chapter*
3DeletedAccountKCS*squee can be heard in the next universe* I was SO SO ridiculously excited when I saw the alert for this in my inbox. :D
Poor Bruce, I admit even after the whole fiasco I did feel sorry for him at the beginning of the chapter. After all, it was logical, and like he said he does look at worst-case scenarios.
And it's very interesting to me that he would think that Clark coming after him would be worse than J'onn - I get the vibe from their conversation, that he thinks it would be worse because Superman would never forgive himself, NOT because he couldn't handle Superman if the need arose (which he already demonstrated that he *could*) and would be scared of him. He was protecting both of them, actually.
And on that topic, their conversation was so perfect - I think it's a mark of a truly deep friendship where one word of "sorry" and "forgiven" can encompass anything and everything, without demanding more from each side. *much approval* And then they can just sit back to watch the fireworks, the matter dropping to never be brought up again (hopefully).
*giggle* Somehow I'm glad Batman wasn't gifted with super-hearing. Not sure anyone on the Watchtower would really be safe from surveillance. ^^
Well, at least Dick can probably go down in that history as being the only person to make Shayera blush and APOLOGIZE for something. :) I'm glad you added that little interlude - it was too cute. Poor Hawkgirl, but I love how you portray Dick Grayson, rebounding from anything after time. That's why I'm a firm believer that no matter what happened, he never would hate Bruce - he's too easygoing and too Good, as Shayera said, to hold a grudge for long.
And I adored the conversation between Dick and Bruce, btw. *snicker* Dick's cheerful acceptance of Bruce's more-than-occasional self-centeredness, and then his wariness as soon as Bruce gets all emotional - and then asking if Clark put him up to it. ROTFL.
Lastly I also love how everyone in that entire animated universe is always like 'It's the QUESTION, and he's NUTS, so what are you worried about?' Heehee. He'd better hang onto Helena, that's all I've got to say.
Wonderful story, and I am SO glad that you put this last chapter up! It made my weekend - so thank you!
*scurries off to read new other chapter*
7/6/2009 c4 JasonTKD
"But whether we’re together or not, she is pretty protective of me.”
I dunno about that..seems the times she dumps him are the times he needs her the most.
And while Shayera might regret what she did, damn, Nightwing is one lucky s.o.b.. I can think one ONE way she could apologize. ;-) lol kidding, kidding.
"But whether we’re together or not, she is pretty protective of me.”
I dunno about that..seems the times she dumps him are the times he needs her the most.
And while Shayera might regret what she did, damn, Nightwing is one lucky s.o.b.. I can think one ONE way she could apologize. ;-) lol kidding, kidding.
7/6/2009 c4 47Kyer
Ha! I liked that-all of it from Clark to Batman, Shayera, and Nightwing.
Tried to review this yesterday, but got a paragraph into the story when glanced at clock and realized was almost late for work. argh. Better late than never?
47KyerHa! I liked that-all of it from Clark to Batman, Shayera, and Nightwing.
Tried to review this yesterday, but got a paragraph into the story when glanced at clock and realized was almost late for work. argh. Better late than never?
7/5/2009 c4 8icebreaker316
HAHA. I'm so glad you tacked this on at the end. Omg, poor Shayera. I'd be mortified to wake up and find out I raped a twenty-something nice guy. And I love how everyone's like, BUT THE QUESTION IS CRAZY, but Batman is like...so am I. This was really well written, by the way. This one's going in my favs!
8icebreaker316HAHA. I'm so glad you tacked this on at the end. Omg, poor Shayera. I'd be mortified to wake up and find out I raped a twenty-something nice guy. And I love how everyone's like, BUT THE QUESTION IS CRAZY, but Batman is like...so am I. This was really well written, by the way. This one's going in my favs!
7/5/2009 c4 JLMischief
Am I glad you put up this chapter! Now it's easier to live with the "The End" part, coz till now I'd been wondering what happened to Nightwing & Shayera & Batman, & how would Batman explain his actions to Superman - which is not to say that the previous chapter wasn't conclusive, but I like as many loose ends as possible to be tied up, so thank you, & I thank the smart person who convinced you to put this up too!
I really love the way you write all the characters, esp Batman, Superman & Nightwing :D & Shayera too! I think you've had the most fun with her; at least, I've had the most fun reading her - imo, Shayera blushing red & neon-pink & saying stuff like 'I wish you'd confess you were putting on an act, because.. honey, you're not my type' just asks for this fic to go up as a favourite! Thanks for a great read, & I'm looking forward to more of your stuff ^_^
Am I glad you put up this chapter! Now it's easier to live with the "The End" part, coz till now I'd been wondering what happened to Nightwing & Shayera & Batman, & how would Batman explain his actions to Superman - which is not to say that the previous chapter wasn't conclusive, but I like as many loose ends as possible to be tied up, so thank you, & I thank the smart person who convinced you to put this up too!
I really love the way you write all the characters, esp Batman, Superman & Nightwing :D & Shayera too! I think you've had the most fun with her; at least, I've had the most fun reading her - imo, Shayera blushing red & neon-pink & saying stuff like 'I wish you'd confess you were putting on an act, because.. honey, you're not my type' just asks for this fic to go up as a favourite! Thanks for a great read, & I'm looking forward to more of your stuff ^_^
7/5/2009 c4 14Anna McNarin
I'm glad you decided to post this little epilogue, I really do enjoy the way you write the banter between these two. I do see how it wouldn't have fit in the actual story line, but I'm happy you let us viewers read it. :)
14Anna McNarinI'm glad you decided to post this little epilogue, I really do enjoy the way you write the banter between these two. I do see how it wouldn't have fit in the actual story line, but I'm happy you let us viewers read it. :)