4/20/2011 c1 Guest
@ aperson have u read transformation and artificial intelligience or unconditional love yet?
@ aperson have u read transformation and artificial intelligience or unconditional love yet?
4/19/2011 c1 Guest
Yay Chachamaru might find her humanity keep going plz
Yay Chachamaru might find her humanity keep going plz
3/16/2011 c2 1Braka Lightbringer
I like it it put into action a idea seldom used in possibly giving Chachamaru her humanity. Keep going,I want more of this.
I like it it put into action a idea seldom used in possibly giving Chachamaru her humanity. Keep going,I want more of this.
5/18/2009 c2 Yaki
You definitely have an interesting story idea, but you seriously need to work on your grammar, spelling, and punctuation. Just putting the story through a grammar check in Word should improve it a lot.
You definitely have an interesting story idea, but you seriously need to work on your grammar, spelling, and punctuation. Just putting the story through a grammar check in Word should improve it a lot.
5/13/2009 c2 9Sailor Enlil
Um, this chapter has identical content to the previous one. Maybe you loaded the wrong document by mistake?
Um, this chapter has identical content to the previous one. Maybe you loaded the wrong document by mistake?
5/13/2009 c1 Aperson
This seems interesting, please continue. There are not enough good Chachamaru stories on this site
This seems interesting, please continue. There are not enough good Chachamaru stories on this site