for Albus Severus Potter's First Year at Hogwarts5/20/2012 c3 Bob
I think it was a well thought piece but I think you could have gone into more detail and that but overall it was great!
I think it was a well thought piece but I think you could have gone into more detail and that but overall it was great!
2/18/2012 c3 Amy
that was pretty good i really liked it but my favorite part was the friend ship between Albus and Scorpius
that was pretty good i really liked it but my favorite part was the friend ship between Albus and Scorpius
1/25/2012 c1 Sticking Up for someone
Wow I really like your story! and YOU WISH person, not every story has to follow the original. We come on fanfiction to create our OWN story. So, so what if it doesn't follow the original. Someone may know Harry Potter or whatever they are writing about extremely well but that doesn't mean that they can change things and interpret it however they like. If you weren't afraid to say who you actually were, because you are too childish to say who you are and keep it anonymous as You Wish, is you being a chicken. You are just hiding or being a complete hypocrite because you are ashamed of your stories that you have written. If you reviewed as your name with that review it isn't like we'd go to your page and say this is wrong, try again, its horrible, its a fail. No, we wouldn't, so it is rude to say that to the writer of this story who takes their time writing it and getting criticized. What is that saying about you? It may be a comment of what you think but the truth is? It is that you are being an jerk to to writer. What if it was your story? Or are yours that bad that you have to hide your name? or did you write nothing because yours would be terrible? Or you just rewrote what the original writer wrote so that would be considered plagiarism. Which is REALLY BAD. I hope that isn't the case. But, so that is what you do, act rudely to people who write a great story and their own interpretation of something. Wow. PATHETIC. Such a hypocrite.
Oh by the way, Snowwygirl4, this is a great story and interpretation of what happens when Albus Severus goes to Hogwarts! :)
Wow I really like your story! and YOU WISH person, not every story has to follow the original. We come on fanfiction to create our OWN story. So, so what if it doesn't follow the original. Someone may know Harry Potter or whatever they are writing about extremely well but that doesn't mean that they can change things and interpret it however they like. If you weren't afraid to say who you actually were, because you are too childish to say who you are and keep it anonymous as You Wish, is you being a chicken. You are just hiding or being a complete hypocrite because you are ashamed of your stories that you have written. If you reviewed as your name with that review it isn't like we'd go to your page and say this is wrong, try again, its horrible, its a fail. No, we wouldn't, so it is rude to say that to the writer of this story who takes their time writing it and getting criticized. What is that saying about you? It may be a comment of what you think but the truth is? It is that you are being an jerk to to writer. What if it was your story? Or are yours that bad that you have to hide your name? or did you write nothing because yours would be terrible? Or you just rewrote what the original writer wrote so that would be considered plagiarism. Which is REALLY BAD. I hope that isn't the case. But, so that is what you do, act rudely to people who write a great story and their own interpretation of something. Wow. PATHETIC. Such a hypocrite.
Oh by the way, Snowwygirl4, this is a great story and interpretation of what happens when Albus Severus goes to Hogwarts! :)
12/4/2011 c1 U Wish
Nice try! But if you had done any research on Harry Potter or JK Rowling you would know that Neville marrys Hannah Abbot and Luna marrys a man named Rolf and has children much later in life. Also Neville is the herbology teacher, why would his son be on the train if his dad was a teacher. Better luck next time!
Nice try! But if you had done any research on Harry Potter or JK Rowling you would know that Neville marrys Hannah Abbot and Luna marrys a man named Rolf and has children much later in life. Also Neville is the herbology teacher, why would his son be on the train if his dad was a teacher. Better luck next time!
8/23/2011 c3 Guest
So far this is really good, it will be a really good book. Keep up this really good book.
So far this is really good, it will be a really good book. Keep up this really good book.
28/28/2010 c2 BUTTERFLY
I LIKE IT U HAVE DONE A VERY GOOD JOB WITH ALL OF THE CHAPTERS IN ALL OF THE STORIES! I JUST WISH YOU COULD UPDATE A LITTLE FASTER! I FINISHED ALL THE HARRY POTTER'S AND I KINDA MISS ALL THE ADVENTURES BUT NOW THERE IS ONE BEING STARTED WITH HIS KIDS SOOO!1 I AM VERY HAPPY!
I LIKE IT U HAVE DONE A VERY GOOD JOB WITH ALL OF THE CHAPTERS IN ALL OF THE STORIES! I JUST WISH YOU COULD UPDATE A LITTLE FASTER! I FINISHED ALL THE HARRY POTTER'S AND I KINDA MISS ALL THE ADVENTURES BUT NOW THERE IS ONE BEING STARTED WITH HIS KIDS SOOO!1 I AM VERY HAPPY!
4/28/2010 c1 sam
right more plz you are a good a jkr!
right more plz you are a good a jkr!
7/1/2009 c1 AccountKiller456
Hi! I like you're story, am totally ready for the next chapter. But I feel sorry for Albus-Severus - imagine having a name like that! Anyway, it's really good, please continue.
Hi! I like you're story, am totally ready for the next chapter. But I feel sorry for Albus-Severus - imagine having a name like that! Anyway, it's really good, please continue.