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5/31/2009 c1 100terra hotaru
"Kami, Sora. Can you be any more obnoxious?"

Umm.. sorry but I have to seriously FROWN here. and I mean.. FROWN. I don't get why you would want to put "kami" here instead of "god"... I really suggest you to put God instead of "kami"...really, I don't think...

Anyway, just a matter or my preferences again. And I have no doubt that this fic is well written, but the japanese word reference has turned me down from reading on. Just wanted to say my thoughts. Good job on the fic though. And again, I mean no offense, merely voicing my thoughts. Please ignore this review completely if it has done any harm to you and if that happens, I sincerely apologize. Thank you.
5/10/2009 c1 38Yunagirl07
That was brilliant!

Haha, Riku is totally amazing xD

Yeah, but Axel and Roxas were so cute x3
5/9/2009 c1 Deathcas
PURE LOL! XD I LOVED IT! LMAO!

THE LAST BIT IS FUNNY! RIKU CAN SEE INTO THE FUTURE...AND HE GETS $10...SWEET...XD

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