8/7/2010 c4 9Cause in the daylight-x
Yay you updated! :D. Loved it. Great chapter as usual. As much as I love Mitchie and Nate hanging out, I don't like Nitchie. kinda weird i guess tho cause i love their conversations and them getting annoyed at each other and stuff. aw she's sleeping at the mansion. koool. can't wait to understand more of who this "Boss" is. can't wait for the next update :)
Yay you updated! :D. Loved it. Great chapter as usual. As much as I love Mitchie and Nate hanging out, I don't like Nitchie. kinda weird i guess tho cause i love their conversations and them getting annoyed at each other and stuff. aw she's sleeping at the mansion. koool. can't wait to understand more of who this "Boss" is. can't wait for the next update :)
8/2/2010 c3 Cause in the daylight-x
yeesh Mitchie is no angel. Very cold D:. lol. Haha I love Nate in this story already :) This is soo soo good and interesting. I love the detail you put into this and it's not all dialog like a lot of stories on here :D I really hope you update soon because I think this can be an amazing story if you continue!
yeesh Mitchie is no angel. Very cold D:. lol. Haha I love Nate in this story already :) This is soo soo good and interesting. I love the detail you put into this and it's not all dialog like a lot of stories on here :D I really hope you update soon because I think this can be an amazing story if you continue!
8/2/2010 c2 Cause in the daylight-x
whoa. i love this :) shane is sooo cocky lol i can't believe he dumped his drink on her! on to the next chapter. btw this story deserves more than 9 reviews. psh. what's wrong with people on here? are they lazy? :)
whoa. i love this :) shane is sooo cocky lol i can't believe he dumped his drink on her! on to the next chapter. btw this story deserves more than 9 reviews. psh. what's wrong with people on here? are they lazy? :)
7/1/2009 c2 3wordsofjade
Hey! I was looking at your profile and I came across this mysterious "summary inside" story (liar! jk) and now I'm like, hey where is this going? lol I like that you used my nickname! haha that's coolie! :)
Hey! I was looking at your profile and I came across this mysterious "summary inside" story (liar! jk) and now I'm like, hey where is this going? lol I like that you used my nickname! haha that's coolie! :)
6/9/2009 c2 11razzledazzle96
wow. i have an idea as to what i THINK this story will be about, but i cant wait for the truth...haha. anyway, update soon :)
wow. i have an idea as to what i THINK this story will be about, but i cant wait for the truth...haha. anyway, update soon :)
6/9/2009 c2 14Eveliuxx
i'm confused...i like it an all but please tell me whats going on!
i luv the story but tell me whats it about! :D :D :D
but i luv stories like this...makes u think :D
i'm confused...i like it an all but please tell me whats going on!
i luv the story but tell me whats it about! :D :D :D
but i luv stories like this...makes u think :D
6/9/2009 c1 Eveliuxx
WOAH...i pressed the button...awesom! well that was kinda creepy but really intresting andwell written... :D cant wait to read more :D
WOAH...i pressed the button...awesom! well that was kinda creepy but really intresting andwell written... :D cant wait to read more :D