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"You're ass looks delicious..." "You're" is the contraction for "you are." The possessive form is "your." (For example: "Since you're trying to tease me, your ass looks delicious.")
"You're ass looks delicious..." "You're" is the contraction for "you are." The possessive form is "your." (For example: "Since you're trying to tease me, your ass looks delicious.")
10/3/2023 c15 bpanther
This was such a wild ride, not my usual cup of tea but you got me hooked. Thank you!
This was such a wild ride, not my usual cup of tea but you got me hooked. Thank you!
3/13/2023 c14 Sapphire Archeron Cullen
I shouldn't laugh in such a tense situation but JESUS CHRIST EMMETT-
His perfectly timed entry and dialogue here is cracking me up.
I shouldn't laugh in such a tense situation but JESUS CHRIST EMMETT-
His perfectly timed entry and dialogue here is cracking me up.
6/20/2022 c15 
3stopthinking.justwrite
This was so different than the other story of yours that I read, but just as awesome! Great job!
3stopthinking.justwriteThis was so different than the other story of yours that I read, but just as awesome! Great job!
10/8/2021 c3 Guest
It's IN CASE (two words), not INCASE. Look it up if you don't believe me.
It's IN CASE (two words), not INCASE. Look it up if you don't believe me.
1/3/2021 c14 Guest
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8/25/2020 c15 Mrs. O'Shea
I loved this. I can’t believe I have never read it before. I’ve read kidnapper probably 20 times. I hope Bella writes a book about this experience. Great story.
I loved this. I can’t believe I have never read it before. I’ve read kidnapper probably 20 times. I hope Bella writes a book about this experience. Great story.
3/17/2019 c10 VryUnique
I wish Bella was more kick ass during the fight, it seemed too much like she got lucky.
I wish Bella was more kick ass during the fight, it seemed too much like she got lucky.