for Frightful Nights5/18/2010 c1 
7AnimeGamer42
I like this. I think you may have a talent for writing romance. ^_^ RikuxSelphie is my absolute favorite pairing for KH. And you did a great job with this. I want to offer a little constructive criticism though. The story is good I just want to tell you that when writing stories you should watch your typos. For instance is says "bue" when you meant "blue". Little things like that. I know I probably have some in my writing too. It's easy to do. And just another note... if you like the RikuxSelphie pairing I would be happy if you'd check out my other story called What Dreams Are Made Of. It's a three part series of the pairing RikuxSelphie along with others. I am done with 1&2 and currently in the process of writing 3. Thanks! And I'm hoping I can look forward to more of your writing about RikuxSelphie if you get more ideas.
7AnimeGamer42I like this. I think you may have a talent for writing romance. ^_^ RikuxSelphie is my absolute favorite pairing for KH. And you did a great job with this. I want to offer a little constructive criticism though. The story is good I just want to tell you that when writing stories you should watch your typos. For instance is says "bue" when you meant "blue". Little things like that. I know I probably have some in my writing too. It's easy to do. And just another note... if you like the RikuxSelphie pairing I would be happy if you'd check out my other story called What Dreams Are Made Of. It's a three part series of the pairing RikuxSelphie along with others. I am done with 1&2 and currently in the process of writing 3. Thanks! And I'm hoping I can look forward to more of your writing about RikuxSelphie if you get more ideas.
12/27/2009 c1 28Mug of Doodles
This was absolutely adorable...I stumbled upon this pairing about 15 minutes ago and so far this was the cutest one.
28Mug of DoodlesThis was absolutely adorable...I stumbled upon this pairing about 15 minutes ago and so far this was the cutest one.
5/31/2009 c1 2epilectic.trees
This is sweet! It's an uncommon pairing, I think this is the first RikuxSelphie i've seen. It's short and sweet, I think you did well. 3
2epilectic.treesThis is sweet! It's an uncommon pairing, I think this is the first RikuxSelphie i've seen. It's short and sweet, I think you did well. 3
5/28/2009 c1 8windlady
Oh! I’m a poor girl and is not knowledgeable regarding games and stuff but this is very nice. The story is detailed, simple and yet touching. It completes the goals of a good one-shot! Great work, CattyGothLoli-chan! ^_^
~windlady
Here's my review for your re-uploaded chap in Why Me?
Wow! More details are placed here. Very nice improvement, CattyGothLoli-chan! ^_^ I’ll be expecting your next chapter! ^_^
~windlady
8windladyOh! I’m a poor girl and is not knowledgeable regarding games and stuff but this is very nice. The story is detailed, simple and yet touching. It completes the goals of a good one-shot! Great work, CattyGothLoli-chan! ^_^
~windlady
Here's my review for your re-uploaded chap in Why Me?
Wow! More details are placed here. Very nice improvement, CattyGothLoli-chan! ^_^ I’ll be expecting your next chapter! ^_^
~windlady
5/20/2009 c1 Angelically Scarred
Temari: I loved it! It was SO CUTE! They're meant for eachother!^^
Dark: Cute and fluffy. I liked how you wrote this.
Temari: I loved it! It was SO CUTE! They're meant for eachother!^^
Dark: Cute and fluffy. I liked how you wrote this.
5/16/2009 c1 Therrow
:) thank you for dedicating it for me:) thank you ^.^ it was really good aswell :) thank you..again lol...im doing a sequal to my story called 'my secret guardian angel' about selphie and riku so look out for that and you should write more selphie and riku n kingdom heart fanfictions there really good :)
:) thank you for dedicating it for me:) thank you ^.^ it was really good aswell :) thank you..again lol...im doing a sequal to my story called 'my secret guardian angel' about selphie and riku so look out for that and you should write more selphie and riku n kingdom heart fanfictions there really good :)
5/15/2009 c1 30LILMISSS
This was cute. Hehe. Though I was slightly put off by the fact that Selphie said that "if it was Tidus he probably couldn't have dodged it" because it sort of spoils the mood. I mean, if I were Riku, even though it was a compliment, I wouldn't take it very well. Adding another man into the picture can make Riku...jealous or suspicious.
Aside from that, not much grammatical errors. And uh...I liked it (:
30LILMISSSThis was cute. Hehe. Though I was slightly put off by the fact that Selphie said that "if it was Tidus he probably couldn't have dodged it" because it sort of spoils the mood. I mean, if I were Riku, even though it was a compliment, I wouldn't take it very well. Adding another man into the picture can make Riku...jealous or suspicious.
Aside from that, not much grammatical errors. And uh...I liked it (: