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2/23/2016 c1 BethelaP
I love this fic.
8/18/2012 c1 Wendy
Wow,... This is amazing, ... No words to describe. Short but emotional and meaningful. You are awesome!
3/3/2011 c1 3mdgc1973
Beautiful. It almost made me cry!
3/24/2010 c1 Professor Specter
[Was hunting, so I didn't log in, but there I be, sorry.]

Waow, che mucho beautiful. Strictly speaking in terms of gameplay, I actually just want to stab Raphael and be done with it [Gr, shut up you old man...]. That aside, this was extremely well done, and very enjoyable. It was a good ending, but ah, lament, be there no more? I'm sure even a small snippet to follow-although it would start to brush into SCII, ne?-would be marvelous.

Excellent, my dear.

Love,

Professor Specter
6/1/2009 c1 18fivethingsunmixed
Utterly beautiful.

The contrast and similarities between Amy and Raphael are lovely, and I adore the way you describe their appearances - it's written so well I can see them without having to close my eyes. The way they act and react towards one another is wonderful and engaging.

I don't have much to say about this that isn't oodles of adoring praise.
5/21/2009 c1 10TearsOfAnotherBrokenHeart
Wow. That was simply adorable. I love the emotion that you put into their first meeting! And though you did not describe the full extent of their lives before they met each other, I believed you captured it well.
5/16/2009 c1 2LunarWildRose
Oh God... you will not know how much I became absorbed, how much I loved this... I admire these two, and you wrote them in such a beautiful way... I cannot begin to describe how this made me feel; I really beg you to continue, as soon as you may. I love how you stayed quite close to the canon storyline, as well as brought this Father, and Daughter, together... especially the ending part, made my heart ache... the two need one another, and I was almost afraid of Amy telling him the painful truth there...

Pray, continue. :)

~Pris

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