for Finally6/15/2009 c1 Catch-Smoke
its been a while since i've read some good ron/hermione fanfiction but this was awesome.
The emotion and timing was perfect as were your portrayal of the characters.
kudos! :)
its been a while since i've read some good ron/hermione fanfiction but this was awesome.
The emotion and timing was perfect as were your portrayal of the characters.
kudos! :)
5/27/2009 c1 
30bobbymcfoogle
Oh, no! This was very well written and true to the characters.
At least we all know it has a happy ending, eh?
30bobbymcfoogleOh, no! This was very well written and true to the characters.
At least we all know it has a happy ending, eh?
5/21/2009 c1 8LoonyLurvesFred
Angsty. I liked it. Very much in character for the most part (I don't think Ron would've cupped her cheek cuz he's too shy to make such a bold move but it is a romance fic after all and Ron always needed a good push). Keep writing more R & H.
8LoonyLurvesFredAngsty. I liked it. Very much in character for the most part (I don't think Ron would've cupped her cheek cuz he's too shy to make such a bold move but it is a romance fic after all and Ron always needed a good push). Keep writing more R & H.
5/16/2009 c1 saskiawrites
I like it! They're so in character, especially Hermione - it's a very visual piece, I could see it all happening... well done! Keep writing!
I like it! They're so in character, especially Hermione - it's a very visual piece, I could see it all happening... well done! Keep writing!