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8/20/2015 c2 i am. sorrowfull
i pray it was a dream..without her i am dead.. nnothing was a game.. i was just stupid..
8/20/2015 c1 no.pic.no.laugh
snow killed ears mind and heart..life sucks without freind..
1/19/2014 c2 Anonymous
Good job!
1/19/2014 c1 Anonymous
Not bad!
11/21/2012 c2 Wings2strong
...Update?...Please...?
8/30/2012 c1 EmbraceTheLies
WHY HAVEN'T YOU UPDATED THIS YET!?
8/24/2012 c2 Guest
I freaki' love this story so much! I almost died when you said 'like underworld bitches' XD now Idemand you update the story so that Imay read more!
9/12/2011 c2 1The Tempest Road
Please update! I really want to see some ikkixringo especially if ikki is gonna be vampire! There is so much ikkixkazu its not even funny. Plaza Update! Don't disappoint your fans.!
8/13/2010 c2 1notusingthisaccounteveragain
Omg this story gave me the freaken chills and that almost never happens, I hope you finish the story. 333333
3/8/2010 c1 MackenzieWolf13
i want to whats the next chapter iam loving this please continui i can't wait what happens next! XDXD
11/21/2009 c1 IEATBRAAAIN
ahh...

finally. a non yaoi fanfiction for Agito . WOHOO. XD

hey i like your idea for using vampires action for agito and the others. its killing me out.0_O

i read this story until late and i fell asleep in front of my computer. but for some reason i must concentrate to read this story because you stick the paragraphs with the other one. and i read this story like a newspaper. :P

oh and one thing dear. i hope you won't get down for the few reviews you received. Because i really enjoying my time to read your story kay. I will wait for the next chapters.

can't wait to see agito in actions again. drool*
5/18/2009 c1 5xKairix
Nice! Can't wait to read the rest.

Btw, just something I've noticed; you tend to not really space your paragraphs very well. They're kinda all bunched up together and then sometimes spaced apart. When you have a person talking, you have it as one paragraph. When a new person speaks, it's a new paragraph. I dunno why, but thats just how the English language is

So say for example;

"Hey, Bill, you wanna come for a swim tomorrow?" asked Bob.

When Bill replies, it's as new paragraph. So,

"Hey, Bill, you wanna come for a swim tomorrow?" asked Bob.

"Sure, why not?" replied Bill.

I dunno if you know this already, but if you follow this rule then your writing will be a lot better and much easier to read thus more readers! XD

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