for Forbidden Love:Between Vampires and Slayers8/20/2015 c2 i am. sorrowfull
i pray it was a dream..without her i am dead.. nnothing was a game.. i was just stupid..
i pray it was a dream..without her i am dead.. nnothing was a game.. i was just stupid..
8/20/2015 c1 no.pic.no.laugh
snow killed ears mind and heart..life sucks without freind..
snow killed ears mind and heart..life sucks without freind..
1/19/2014 c2 Anonymous
Good job!
Good job!
1/19/2014 c1 Anonymous
Not bad!
Not bad!
11/21/2012 c2 Wings2strong
...Update?...Please...?
...Update?...Please...?
8/24/2012 c2 Guest
I freaki' love this story so much! I almost died when you said 'like underworld bitches' XD now Idemand you update the story so that Imay read more!
I freaki' love this story so much! I almost died when you said 'like underworld bitches' XD now Idemand you update the story so that Imay read more!
9/12/2011 c2 
1The Tempest Road
Please update! I really want to see some ikkixringo especially if ikki is gonna be vampire! There is so much ikkixkazu its not even funny. Plaza Update! Don't disappoint your fans.!
1The Tempest RoadPlease update! I really want to see some ikkixringo especially if ikki is gonna be vampire! There is so much ikkixkazu its not even funny. Plaza Update! Don't disappoint your fans.!
8/13/2010 c2 1notusingthisaccounteveragain
Omg this story gave me the freaken chills and that almost never happens, I hope you finish the story. 333333
1notusingthisaccounteveragainOmg this story gave me the freaken chills and that almost never happens, I hope you finish the story. 333333
3/8/2010 c1 MackenzieWolf13
i want to whats the next chapter iam loving this please continui i can't wait what happens next! XDXD
i want to whats the next chapter iam loving this please continui i can't wait what happens next! XDXD
11/21/2009 c1 IEATBRAAAIN
ahh...
finally. a non yaoi fanfiction for Agito . WOHOO. XD
hey i like your idea for using vampires action for agito and the others. its killing me out.0_O
i read this story until late and i fell asleep in front of my computer. but for some reason i must concentrate to read this story because you stick the paragraphs with the other one. and i read this story like a newspaper. :P
oh and one thing dear. i hope you won't get down for the few reviews you received. Because i really enjoying my time to read your story kay. I will wait for the next chapters.
can't wait to see agito in actions again. drool*
ahh...
finally. a non yaoi fanfiction for Agito . WOHOO. XD
hey i like your idea for using vampires action for agito and the others. its killing me out.0_O
i read this story until late and i fell asleep in front of my computer. but for some reason i must concentrate to read this story because you stick the paragraphs with the other one. and i read this story like a newspaper. :P
oh and one thing dear. i hope you won't get down for the few reviews you received. Because i really enjoying my time to read your story kay. I will wait for the next chapters.
can't wait to see agito in actions again. drool*
5/18/2009 c1 5xKairix
Nice! Can't wait to read the rest.
Btw, just something I've noticed; you tend to not really space your paragraphs very well. They're kinda all bunched up together and then sometimes spaced apart. When you have a person talking, you have it as one paragraph. When a new person speaks, it's a new paragraph. I dunno why, but thats just how the English language is
So say for example;
"Hey, Bill, you wanna come for a swim tomorrow?" asked Bob.
When Bill replies, it's as new paragraph. So,
"Hey, Bill, you wanna come for a swim tomorrow?" asked Bob.
"Sure, why not?" replied Bill.
I dunno if you know this already, but if you follow this rule then your writing will be a lot better and much easier to read thus more readers! XD
5xKairixNice! Can't wait to read the rest.
Btw, just something I've noticed; you tend to not really space your paragraphs very well. They're kinda all bunched up together and then sometimes spaced apart. When you have a person talking, you have it as one paragraph. When a new person speaks, it's a new paragraph. I dunno why, but thats just how the English language is
So say for example;
"Hey, Bill, you wanna come for a swim tomorrow?" asked Bob.
When Bill replies, it's as new paragraph. So,
"Hey, Bill, you wanna come for a swim tomorrow?" asked Bob.
"Sure, why not?" replied Bill.
I dunno if you know this already, but if you follow this rule then your writing will be a lot better and much easier to read thus more readers! XD