for Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha: Primary Magicks6/9/2016 c3 RoseBloodmane
Well Interesting story. Wish someone would make Nanoha a Close combat fighter or something like that it be interesting what they come up with.
I'll be waiting to see how this turns out if it is ever updated.
Well Interesting story. Wish someone would make Nanoha a Close combat fighter or something like that it be interesting what they come up with.
I'll be waiting to see how this turns out if it is ever updated.
6/9/2016 c2 RoseBloodmane
Nice Chapter. Though it be nice if she was close range and mid range magic user. I think that would be interesting. Also I think a feisty Nanoha would be more welcome. One where she hit Yuuno a lot, crushes alarm clocks, or throws alarm clocks out the window. I guess that would be more humor then anything I suppose. Anyways I hope she is actually Close range and Mid range mage. That would make this story better.
Nice Chapter. Though it be nice if she was close range and mid range magic user. I think that would be interesting. Also I think a feisty Nanoha would be more welcome. One where she hit Yuuno a lot, crushes alarm clocks, or throws alarm clocks out the window. I guess that would be more humor then anything I suppose. Anyways I hope she is actually Close range and Mid range mage. That would make this story better.
8/5/2010 c3 Cthreen
You've got some interesting original concepts here. I have to wonder how Fate might deal with these new developments. Unfortunately, it seems this story isn't active.
You've got some interesting original concepts here. I have to wonder how Fate might deal with these new developments. Unfortunately, it seems this story isn't active.
6/5/2009 c3 murray
i love this. I like your whole take on Nanoha's magic and i can't wait for the meeting with Fate. Keep writing :)
i love this. I like your whole take on Nanoha's magic and i can't wait for the meeting with Fate. Keep writing :)
5/22/2009 c3 CyberAngelOne
I just love how things are going so far and I can not wait to see the next chapter, that I hope will come out soon. I wander how Fate will react to Nanoha now. I doubt that she will be beat down like she was the first time they meet in the cannon.
I just love how things are going so far and I can not wait to see the next chapter, that I hope will come out soon. I wander how Fate will react to Nanoha now. I doubt that she will be beat down like she was the first time they meet in the cannon.
5/18/2009 c2 
1Jeikobu Mayakashi
Nice, I hope to see chapter 3 up in the near future, I just finished the Nanoha anime (regular through StrikerS) a few days ago and I like your take on it.
1Jeikobu MayakashiNice, I hope to see chapter 3 up in the near future, I just finished the Nanoha anime (regular through StrikerS) a few days ago and I like your take on it.
5/17/2009 c2 12Gixie
Hey I really like the storyline so far, but the only thing I don't particularly like is how Yuuno acts. He seems to act a lot older than a nine year old or maybe its that he seems a bit different in you're story than in the anime.
Update soon!
12GixieHey I really like the storyline so far, but the only thing I don't particularly like is how Yuuno acts. He seems to act a lot older than a nine year old or maybe its that he seems a bit different in you're story than in the anime.
Update soon!
5/17/2009 c1 Aqulize
I must say that I'm glad your doing a nanoha story, because I really liked Red moon rising and nanoha is one of my favorite shows. I also think the premise of nanoha having and using a rare type of magic is something rarely do and refreshing.
I must say that I'm glad your doing a nanoha story, because I really liked Red moon rising and nanoha is one of my favorite shows. I also think the premise of nanoha having and using a rare type of magic is something rarely do and refreshing.