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7/7/2009 c6 42jelliclesoul635
Let me just say that your descriptions are awesome! You detailed the gruesomeness perfectly! It is definitely one of your stronger assets!

This story was full of determination and romance. I enjoyed it a lot. =)

Keep writing!

-jelliclesoul635
5/22/2009 c6 1PurpleFullMoon
yea! i cant wait to read the next part
5/22/2009 c6 61musicgal3
Aw, sweet chapter! And, once again, awesome! I particularly love this line: "The Maine Coon then showed one of the many reasons behind his name. He tugged at the ginger tail repeatedly while Munku managed to batter Macavity's head." Keep up the great writing! :-)
5/21/2009 c5 1PurpleFullMoon
thanks for writing
5/21/2009 c4 61musicgal3
Oh...I'm on tenterhooks! (I hope they don't hurt, because I'm gonna be on them until another chapter makes its way here, lol).
5/21/2009 c3 musicgal3
Hm, interesting...and more interesting still would be seeing what happens next. Great chapter.
5/21/2009 c3 15Khaz-Calowiel
next?

Du: NEXT!

OH BAST! I FEEL FOR ETCETERA MORE THAN EVER...

Skop: She's fearful now. Macavity wanted a mate; clearly he wanted a child. Will he come for Duendei?

Bom Bom Bom! (as in sudden realisation of greta horror music)

DU: *glare* Not nice.
5/21/2009 c2 Khaz-Calowiel
Duendei: WOAH! And to think i was so naive to think i'd seen Tugger in action...

I hate Macavity. Just thought i'd put it out there...
5/21/2009 c2 negligibleSanity
oh noes! MACAVITY!

but the part about Bomba and Tugger was sweet.

Can't wait for the rest, Az. this is really good!

-Artemis
5/20/2009 c2 61musicgal3
Great story so far and I can't wait to see what happens! I love you writing style. :-)

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