
1/27/2014 c1
3Dishie
Hello, Dusty. I thought I'd check out your story, and although I don't know these characters, I will comment on your writing. I enjoyed it. It flowed very well and made it very easy for me to understand. I think you are a very talented writer, now if I can get you over to my world ... :)

Hello, Dusty. I thought I'd check out your story, and although I don't know these characters, I will comment on your writing. I enjoyed it. It flowed very well and made it very easy for me to understand. I think you are a very talented writer, now if I can get you over to my world ... :)
9/17/2011 c1 James Birdsong
Well done
Well done
6/28/2011 c1 anonym
This was beautiful. Well written and engaging. Try making it longer next time; I wouldn't mind reading more. :)
This was beautiful. Well written and engaging. Try making it longer next time; I wouldn't mind reading more. :)
6/25/2010 c1 ichigomich
Aww... so great su~! So Sweet. I actually had tears in my eyes it was so good. Keep up the amazing job. Us nerds need your amazing stories here in fanfic!
Aww... so great su~! So Sweet. I actually had tears in my eyes it was so good. Keep up the amazing job. Us nerds need your amazing stories here in fanfic!
11/2/2009 c1 Triangle Undone
Short, sweet, and it receives my seal of Approval xD
I liked it, it's a fair inner monologue. Expansion seems to be my only gripe, it was somewhat abrupt in it's transition from Weak to Strong.
These are only the opinions of one person, your stories are your own.
Keep on Trucking,
TU
Short, sweet, and it receives my seal of Approval xD
I liked it, it's a fair inner monologue. Expansion seems to be my only gripe, it was somewhat abrupt in it's transition from Weak to Strong.
These are only the opinions of one person, your stories are your own.
Keep on Trucking,
TU
5/21/2009 c1
1SleepSleepIsGood
dork...MWAHAHAHAHAH...okay love you I INTRODUCED YOU TO FANFICS...well sort of...not really...you get the idea

dork...MWAHAHAHAHAH...okay love you I INTRODUCED YOU TO FANFICS...well sort of...not really...you get the idea