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5/27/2009 c1 11I.Am.Fire
That was gorgeous! I absolutely LOVED it! I mean, seriously. It's really hard to fics like that so well. It usually ends up sounding stupid, but not yours. And your vocabulary...I'm sorry, it's just SUCH a relief to find someone who knows as many large and interesting words as I do. Ugh. Okay, that sounded really boasting, and self-centered, and...not like me. I wasn't trying to brag, I was just trying to compliment you and tell the truth! Anyways, I adore your story, and you should most definitely write more.

Until the next dance,

Avalonfreak
5/27/2009 c1 5percabethgirl13
That was very cute and sweet! I love this stuff!
5/27/2009 c1 7bombplaya3
unique idea but very VERY good!
5/27/2009 c1 The Demented Leprechaun
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Too good for words. You should make more like this.
5/27/2009 c1 53Zagury
Oh.

Just... oh.

"The best part is when he’s inches away from her face and she can count every speck of light that falls into his eyes."

But see, I agreed with everything you put into this story, from the themes to the (more than) fifty sentences. It was a great starter for me to read, and I'm glad it was because this was your first Percy Jackson fanfiction. That's quite the coincidence, isn't it? :)

I enjoyed this.. beyond what I should have. Everything made me smile (especially 45 and 46, their added humour with the romance, so so perfect.)

Wonderful work, kiddo. Just splendid. I'll be reading more of you in the future.
5/27/2009 c1 XXBobBobBobBobXX
Goodjob.Iliked it, it was cute

You should do a one shot on this one: "20.—Neutral

Even though Grover insists he was not going to interfere in any possible way, both Annabeth’s and Percy’s suspicions are confirmed when he pushes them into the abandoned storage closet and locks the door." Lols, it would be cute!
5/27/2009 c1 40S.N. Rainsworth
absolutly brilliant. speechless. 50 statement, very true about our favorite couple spoken by fifty words that coudnt have been chosen better.

Speechless.
5/27/2009 c1 4Stultus
lol, "Did you just propose to me in the middle of the underworld" was good, but "Fields of Punishment" would have been better. XD
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