
9/8/2011 c3
1RavenKyraAzlynMasen
Are you ever going to update this story? It's amazing and it's kind of going to waste here in the fanfic archives. I would sing happy little tunes if you were to update so please aid me in annoying my sister with said tunes!
Raven

Are you ever going to update this story? It's amazing and it's kind of going to waste here in the fanfic archives. I would sing happy little tunes if you were to update so please aid me in annoying my sister with said tunes!
Raven
9/21/2009 c3 TexasTwilight77
Again I really like it. I'm curious as to how they get together. Is there going to be a little jealousy that makes Edward realize that he does want Bella as more than just a friend? Can't wait!
Again I really like it. I'm curious as to how they get together. Is there going to be a little jealousy that makes Edward realize that he does want Bella as more than just a friend? Can't wait!
9/21/2009 c2 TexasTwilight77
I think it's great. Unfortunatly I don't know about the jokes! Sorry! :(
I think it's great. Unfortunatly I don't know about the jokes! Sorry! :(
9/15/2009 c3 Twilights1Fan
I think I liked that chapter. They fit so nicely together. It was great to see them doing stuff outside of school and the gang. I Can't wait to read more so please post again real soon!I love this story, it makes me smile :O)
Thanks ~Jennifer.
P.s
I know what you mean about spare time on your hands. I work in the school system as well on the elementary school level. I too have started back to work again. I have such long work days and a family at home to care for, so I can appreciate how life has a way of taking over all your free time. :O)
I think I liked that chapter. They fit so nicely together. It was great to see them doing stuff outside of school and the gang. I Can't wait to read more so please post again real soon!I love this story, it makes me smile :O)
Thanks ~Jennifer.
P.s
I know what you mean about spare time on your hands. I work in the school system as well on the elementary school level. I too have started back to work again. I have such long work days and a family at home to care for, so I can appreciate how life has a way of taking over all your free time. :O)
9/15/2009 c2 Twilights1Fan
I think I'm going to like the way this story plays out. I love the class schedule and the extra together time that Edward and Bella get to spend with each other. It is wonderful how she fits in perfectly with the crowd. I love Dane Cook too, Those jokes were so funny. My favorite was the one about "being struck by a vehicle, when he's describing the car, 'which was a Dodge by the way, and I thought that was kind of funny and ironic'." It was so hilarious! So I wonder what Bella's GPA is and is she planning on going to college? It would be so funny if she too was excepted to and attending Dartmouth even before she knew Edward was going there. Great Chapter! Thanks, ~Jennifer
I think I'm going to like the way this story plays out. I love the class schedule and the extra together time that Edward and Bella get to spend with each other. It is wonderful how she fits in perfectly with the crowd. I love Dane Cook too, Those jokes were so funny. My favorite was the one about "being struck by a vehicle, when he's describing the car, 'which was a Dodge by the way, and I thought that was kind of funny and ironic'." It was so hilarious! So I wonder what Bella's GPA is and is she planning on going to college? It would be so funny if she too was excepted to and attending Dartmouth even before she knew Edward was going there. Great Chapter! Thanks, ~Jennifer
9/14/2009 c1 Twilights1Fan
I'm glad Bella is fitting in and making friends. I think she will have an excellent year! I can't wait until she meets Edward, Will he like her right off the bat? What will she think of him? I can't wait to read more. Please post more chapters. Keep em going so I can follow along. Thanks, ~Jennifer
I'm glad Bella is fitting in and making friends. I think she will have an excellent year! I can't wait until she meets Edward, Will he like her right off the bat? What will she think of him? I can't wait to read more. Please post more chapters. Keep em going so I can follow along. Thanks, ~Jennifer
5/28/2009 c1
1The Twist In Your Story
Your right it is differnt, but I like it so far. Should be interesting to see Edwards reaction to Bella's car later.

Your right it is differnt, but I like it so far. Should be interesting to see Edwards reaction to Bella's car later.
5/28/2009 c1
2FangedLeaf
I like your style, great opening character development. Just watch your narrative(you jumped to 3rd person for a bit in the middle) Can't wait for an update!

I like your style, great opening character development. Just watch your narrative(you jumped to 3rd person for a bit in the middle) Can't wait for an update!