
5/30/2009 c1 mom calling
I thought it was the grunts en masse that shot Zack...the Turks were to take him/them alive but the infantry wanted the scalps...but doesn't matter. I liked what you wrote. Well done. I don't experience Cloud that way but you carried it off very naturally; I love Reno's calling Cloud "babe". I think Reno could/does swing either/both ways, so I'm open... thx. mc
I thought it was the grunts en masse that shot Zack...the Turks were to take him/them alive but the infantry wanted the scalps...but doesn't matter. I liked what you wrote. Well done. I don't experience Cloud that way but you carried it off very naturally; I love Reno's calling Cloud "babe". I think Reno could/does swing either/both ways, so I'm open... thx. mc
5/29/2009 c1
77Aeriths-Rain
I thought you wrote Reno's voice very well, and its sweet, great writing!

I thought you wrote Reno's voice very well, and its sweet, great writing!