for angel and devil3/18/2010 c1 
13SilverBlueAngel
Might want to abandon the script format. It works better when you use details. Also it's less confusing. And don't forget your spelling and grammar. But still, nice idea. It would be nice to see this be updated with a longer chapter.
13SilverBlueAngelMight want to abandon the script format. It works better when you use details. Also it's less confusing. And don't forget your spelling and grammar. But still, nice idea. It would be nice to see this be updated with a longer chapter.
7/25/2009 c2 8PenGator3
Ah, much better, just delete that random chapter that you uploaded first, please.
8PenGator3Ah, much better, just delete that random chapter that you uploaded first, please.
5/29/2009 c1 3i-tried-but-the-fandom-won
you may want to re-upload the chapter because this is random file info
3i-tried-but-the-fandom-wonyou may want to re-upload the chapter because this is random file info