11/28/2006 c8 som1
Great story! Hope you write another one!
Great story! Hope you write another one!
8/23/2006 c8 1Hawaiian-Plumeria
Please write a sequel! I noticed your story is not marked complete on the fanfiction website, you might want to fix tbat. The story was very sweet, it seemed rushed at times, but I really enjoyed it :)
Hawaiian-Plumeria
Please write a sequel! I noticed your story is not marked complete on the fanfiction website, you might want to fix tbat. The story was very sweet, it seemed rushed at times, but I really enjoyed it :)
Hawaiian-Plumeria
8/22/2006 c7 Hawaiian-Plumeria
Aww, this chapter was really sad! :( I hope everything will be resolved.
Hawaiian-Plumeria
Aww, this chapter was really sad! :( I hope everything will be resolved.
Hawaiian-Plumeria
8/22/2006 c6 Hawaiian-Plumeria
I hope that Darien won't be angry with Serena when he finds out she's the Moon Princess. I hope he doesn't go to Jupiter and miss Serena's arrival.
Hawaiian-Plumeria
I hope that Darien won't be angry with Serena when he finds out she's the Moon Princess. I hope he doesn't go to Jupiter and miss Serena's arrival.
Hawaiian-Plumeria
8/22/2006 c5 Hawaiian-Plumeria
The ending was so sad, because she had to leave. When will they see each other again?
Hawaiian-Plumeria
The ending was so sad, because she had to leave. When will they see each other again?
Hawaiian-Plumeria
8/22/2006 c4 Hawaiian-Plumeria
They seem to like kissing, lol :D They're in love :) I hope he doesn't get angry when he finds out she's the Moon Princess.
Hawaiian-Plumeria
They seem to like kissing, lol :D They're in love :) I hope he doesn't get angry when he finds out she's the Moon Princess.
Hawaiian-Plumeria
8/22/2006 c3 Hawaiian-Plumeria
This chapter was so sweet! The story seems a little rushed, but I really enjoyed what I've read so far :)
Hawaiian-Plumeria
This chapter was so sweet! The story seems a little rushed, but I really enjoyed what I've read so far :)
Hawaiian-Plumeria
8/22/2006 c2 Hawaiian-Plumeria
This is a cheery story :) How long will it be until Serena's identity is discovered? I'm glad she contacted her mother and that now her mother knows where to find her. I enjoy reading this story :)
Hawaiian-Plumeria
This is a cheery story :) How long will it be until Serena's identity is discovered? I'm glad she contacted her mother and that now her mother knows where to find her. I enjoy reading this story :)
Hawaiian-Plumeria
8/22/2006 c1 Hawaiian-Plumeria
Great start! I want to know what happens when Serena wakes up :)
Hawaiian-Plumeria
Great start! I want to know what happens when Serena wakes up :)
Hawaiian-Plumeria
9/22/2003 c8 ying
its wonderful!
its wonderful!
5/23/2003 c8 18Ai No Senshi
Oh my gosh!
I stumbled upon this story tonight, and thought to myself, this sounds familiar. That's when I remembered! About a year ago, when I was first starting to write fan fiction, I idolized this story. I pleaded with God to let me write something this good. I just had to review and thank you for becoming part of my inspiration and giving me something to aim for.
Keep writing because you are inspiring,
Ai No Senshi
Oh my gosh!
I stumbled upon this story tonight, and thought to myself, this sounds familiar. That's when I remembered! About a year ago, when I was first starting to write fan fiction, I idolized this story. I pleaded with God to let me write something this good. I just had to review and thank you for becoming part of my inspiration and giving me something to aim for.
Keep writing because you are inspiring,
Ai No Senshi
4/21/2003 c2 Bob the girl
serena is not the smartest criminal in this chapter is the stupidest thing to do when you try to get away with a crime is to call them and "hay whats up ohhya i went to Earth hop u don't mind" unless it is nessinsery and this was not nessinsery + it would have been fun seeing the moon kingdon in chose LOL :):):):):):)
serena is not the smartest criminal in this chapter is the stupidest thing to do when you try to get away with a crime is to call them and "hay whats up ohhya i went to Earth hop u don't mind" unless it is nessinsery and this was not nessinsery + it would have been fun seeing the moon kingdon in chose LOL :):):):):):)