for Complications6/29/2009 c5 
2Space Odin
i liked this chapter and i like this story. i usually don't like very AU stories but i like this one.
2Space Odini liked this chapter and i like this story. i usually don't like very AU stories but i like this one.
6/27/2009 c5 6DarkJason
Writer's block must follow you like a lost puppy! :D But lucky you, you get to go to Disneyworld! XD But as for this chapter, it's not too bad, however, I wish it wasn't too short, along with the lemon, but I understand what you said in the little memo about Soifon's attitude, so I get where your coming from. But as always, you put an effort to make this story as good as you can get it. Motivation and creativity is what I do to make a story entertaining and fun to read and enjoy , and it doesn't hurt to think about what to put in your next chapter to make it better, so for now take the time to reflect while you're at Disneyworld! Because, if you take the time to reflect and think about what exciting things you want to put in the next chapters of your story, you'll feel SO much better when you put up that chapter! Trust me, you'll thank me later!
6DarkJasonWriter's block must follow you like a lost puppy! :D But lucky you, you get to go to Disneyworld! XD But as for this chapter, it's not too bad, however, I wish it wasn't too short, along with the lemon, but I understand what you said in the little memo about Soifon's attitude, so I get where your coming from. But as always, you put an effort to make this story as good as you can get it. Motivation and creativity is what I do to make a story entertaining and fun to read and enjoy , and it doesn't hurt to think about what to put in your next chapter to make it better, so for now take the time to reflect while you're at Disneyworld! Because, if you take the time to reflect and think about what exciting things you want to put in the next chapters of your story, you'll feel SO much better when you put up that chapter! Trust me, you'll thank me later!
6/25/2009 c4 27Houkaru Kisaragi
..What .. horrible past... Ichigo had...
THIS IS MADNESS!
Anyway, good story... keep it up! please make chapter longer if possible... hehehe
27Houkaru Kisaragi..What .. horrible past... Ichigo had...
THIS IS MADNESS!
Anyway, good story... keep it up! please make chapter longer if possible... hehehe
6/16/2009 c4 2ShadowGOUF
wow just how do you do this I mean its the way you use the word I can just see bad ichigo had it you are good as always. "clapping"
2ShadowGOUFwow just how do you do this I mean its the way you use the word I can just see bad ichigo had it you are good as always. "clapping"
6/16/2009 c4 6DarkJason
My god, man! You made Ichigo's mother's death SO gruesome! I can see why he would want to commit suicide, but he shouldn't! He should realize he still has a LOT to live for, even what's right in front of him! In any case, very good work on this chapter! I look forward to the next one soon! XD
6DarkJasonMy god, man! You made Ichigo's mother's death SO gruesome! I can see why he would want to commit suicide, but he shouldn't! He should realize he still has a LOT to live for, even what's right in front of him! In any case, very good work on this chapter! I look forward to the next one soon! XD
6/16/2009 c4 10Heronkai
This is good. I liked the addaption on masaki's murder turned into a real world situation. this is really good. can't wait for next update.
10HeronkaiThis is good. I liked the addaption on masaki's murder turned into a real world situation. this is really good. can't wait for next update.
6/5/2009 c3 wild gesse
good flash back its looking very good so far seeing halibel would be nice. i cant wait for the next chapter
good flash back its looking very good so far seeing halibel would be nice. i cant wait for the next chapter