
5/16 c22 Guest
What a fucked up end when it should have been the middle of the story and the next half should have been about Bella and Edward making a life together.
Why are you glorifying the bastard Michael when he's an obsessive, possessive, proud asshole
What a fucked up end when it should have been the middle of the story and the next half should have been about Bella and Edward making a life together.
Why are you glorifying the bastard Michael when he's an obsessive, possessive, proud asshole
5/16 c21 Guest
Michael seemed like an abusive asshole, slowly breaking her down mentally, emotionally and physically
Michael seemed like an abusive asshole, slowly breaking her down mentally, emotionally and physically
5/16 c20 Guest
Michael IS an asshole and Bella his cheap filthy whore
Michael IS an asshole and Bella his cheap filthy whore
4/25 c1 simplyanaddictio
Thank you for writing such a beautiful piece of work. These are the two most fascinating Edward and Bella characters I've seen in a fanfic - dare I say better than the original?
Your writing is excellent, I hope you have continued to write!
Thank you for writing such a beautiful piece of work. These are the two most fascinating Edward and Bella characters I've seen in a fanfic - dare I say better than the original?
Your writing is excellent, I hope you have continued to write!
2/21 c22 Guest
Till the last chapter it's been all about Michael's prostitute, Bella.
Till the last chapter it's been all about Michael's prostitute, Bella.
2/3 c22 Guest
Desperate Prostitute Bella didn't waste time fucking Michael, the loser who put her down,
Desperate Prostitute Bella didn't waste time fucking Michael, the loser who put her down,
2/3 c22 AnaTwiLover
This was the most fascinating Edward I’ve come across. Stunning writing and wonderful story. Thank you for this! Wish we could get an epilogue!
Analia
This was the most fascinating Edward I’ve come across. Stunning writing and wonderful story. Thank you for this! Wish we could get an epilogue!
Analia
9/30/2024 c20 Guest
This story is so beautiful. Your writing is like poetry
This story is so beautiful. Your writing is like poetry
8/29/2024 c13 Drosselmeyer
When I had read it first time, years ago, I thought Edward was romantic, now I am just disturbed.
Why do authors make men sleep with hundreds of women to make them seem attractive?
It’s such a turn off. People who do terrible things are just terrible people.
When I had read it first time, years ago, I thought Edward was romantic, now I am just disturbed.
Why do authors make men sleep with hundreds of women to make them seem attractive?
It’s such a turn off. People who do terrible things are just terrible people.
7/23/2024 c22 Guest
Damn...I mean at first i thought Edward was soooo cruel...but now I'm kinda for him lol
The ending was nice tho
Damn...I mean at first i thought Edward was soooo cruel...but now I'm kinda for him lol
The ending was nice tho
7/3/2024 c22 Mmagaloo
Thank you..thank you…thank you. I couldn’t put this down. You have a talent. I wish there was more. This is how WH should have ended…taking a risk to choose love. To allow love to change you. You truly have gift. Thank you for this wonderful story.
Thank you..thank you…thank you. I couldn’t put this down. You have a talent. I wish there was more. This is how WH should have ended…taking a risk to choose love. To allow love to change you. You truly have gift. Thank you for this wonderful story.
6/30/2024 c22 EndlessGloaming
That was so atmospheric and so intense, and the writing was beautiful. What an amazing work.
That was so atmospheric and so intense, and the writing was beautiful. What an amazing work.
6/29/2024 c18 EndlessGloaming
The prose in this is beautiful.
Earlier on I was kind of expecting Bella to dump Mike by voicemail as that seemed about what he deserved. Getting his side was a nice turnabout, and damn is it a lot of tension with him here.
The prose in this is beautiful.
Earlier on I was kind of expecting Bella to dump Mike by voicemail as that seemed about what he deserved. Getting his side was a nice turnabout, and damn is it a lot of tension with him here.