for The Blessing and the Curse3/20/2019 c19 Navya Agarwal
I love this. I love this. I love this. This is beautiful. I love the way you write. Please teach me how to write so well. This is pure beauty. I love ya! Thankyou for writing this. So that I was able to read it. I don't really like Twilight series that much, but this fic is very nice. Actually, truly thanks you for writing this.
I love this. I love this. I love this. This is beautiful. I love the way you write. Please teach me how to write so well. This is pure beauty. I love ya! Thankyou for writing this. So that I was able to read it. I don't really like Twilight series that much, but this fic is very nice. Actually, truly thanks you for writing this.
3/16/2019 c22 
1DracoIsLife
This is probably one of the most beautiful stories I’ve ever read. I cannot thank you enough for the work you put into this. I plan to read this again soon
1DracoIsLifeThis is probably one of the most beautiful stories I’ve ever read. I cannot thank you enough for the work you put into this. I plan to read this again soon
3/8/2019 c22 blondjinjit
Wow. Great story although I'm confused how Edward changed through all of the story
Wow. Great story although I'm confused how Edward changed through all of the story
2/27/2019 c2 Freewrite8
I’ve been an editor for over twenty years, and this is one of the best stories I have read. Definitely write a sequel on their adventures from here.
I’ve been an editor for over twenty years, and this is one of the best stories I have read. Definitely write a sequel on their adventures from here.
2/25/2019 c1 9Foenix2phorks
I read this story before and am now at it again. I remember absolutely hating this dark Edward! Then, a couple of chapters later, I found myself warming up to him. A couple of chapters after that I was wondering how Bella could be so stupid for ever leaving him behind! Ha, ha!
So, basically, this story is awesomely wonderful and I love it. This is probably the best Twilight fanfic out there. Period. :-)
9Foenix2phorksI read this story before and am now at it again. I remember absolutely hating this dark Edward! Then, a couple of chapters later, I found myself warming up to him. A couple of chapters after that I was wondering how Bella could be so stupid for ever leaving him behind! Ha, ha!
So, basically, this story is awesomely wonderful and I love it. This is probably the best Twilight fanfic out there. Period. :-)
2/6/2019 c22 akela9
I had a tough time getting through the first few chapters. The relationships seemed abusive, dismissive, and painful. It was a rough slog through. I'm glad I sruck with it. This is a beautiful story. Your writing and imagery are stunning.
I had a tough time getting through the first few chapters. The relationships seemed abusive, dismissive, and painful. It was a rough slog through. I'm glad I sruck with it. This is a beautiful story. Your writing and imagery are stunning.
1/23/2019 c22 Clemence
Hi !
You probably wrote those words ages ago, I mean it’s 2019, who writes twilight fanfic anymore ?
I guess I’m among those who read them... for like a decade hahah
Alright so here we go, your story, highly wuthering height kinda love, is INCREDIBLE !
It’s so well written, smart, lovedddddd the omnicient narator !
Loved the fact that the story begins and end in the house. Every step forward made by Edward and Bella yet happens outside of it. The pressure is very well built as well !
Now let’s stop being objective... I fell in love with your Bella, which is super rare ! You have a very romantic and destroying conception of love that made my heart of glass cry AF ! The gift Esme left to Carlisle was my no return point hahah
And gosh I was so afraid you wouldn’t make her choose Edward, and yet I was almost disappointed she did...
Anyhow i’ve never left a review that long and that messy since a veryyyyyyy long time !
So I truly hope your life is as inspired as you were when you wrote this story because you truly have something going on here !
Hi !
You probably wrote those words ages ago, I mean it’s 2019, who writes twilight fanfic anymore ?
I guess I’m among those who read them... for like a decade hahah
Alright so here we go, your story, highly wuthering height kinda love, is INCREDIBLE !
It’s so well written, smart, lovedddddd the omnicient narator !
Loved the fact that the story begins and end in the house. Every step forward made by Edward and Bella yet happens outside of it. The pressure is very well built as well !
Now let’s stop being objective... I fell in love with your Bella, which is super rare ! You have a very romantic and destroying conception of love that made my heart of glass cry AF ! The gift Esme left to Carlisle was my no return point hahah
And gosh I was so afraid you wouldn’t make her choose Edward, and yet I was almost disappointed she did...
Anyhow i’ve never left a review that long and that messy since a veryyyyyyy long time !
So I truly hope your life is as inspired as you were when you wrote this story because you truly have something going on here !
1/4/2019 c22 26LolaTheSa
Honestly, I think Bella's line of living a hard life without Edward is out of place... Her life wasn't hard, she got into a long term relationship with a guy who has good job with one herself. Sure it would've made her a soulless husk in the end, but I wouldn't call it hard.. I'd call it shallow. She hardly cared for Mike, only reason she might have stayed with him is out of previous obligation, the engagement.
But I guess since we know Edward's life without her, it kinda makes you bias when she says 'hard'. Also I thought Edward had money? Even has a agent.. those ain't cheap..
Good read... dislike that we actually never get to see what they are like in a healthy relationship with nothing holding them back from each other..
26LolaTheSaHonestly, I think Bella's line of living a hard life without Edward is out of place... Her life wasn't hard, she got into a long term relationship with a guy who has good job with one herself. Sure it would've made her a soulless husk in the end, but I wouldn't call it hard.. I'd call it shallow. She hardly cared for Mike, only reason she might have stayed with him is out of previous obligation, the engagement.
But I guess since we know Edward's life without her, it kinda makes you bias when she says 'hard'. Also I thought Edward had money? Even has a agent.. those ain't cheap..
Good read... dislike that we actually never get to see what they are like in a healthy relationship with nothing holding them back from each other..
1/4/2019 c21 LolaTheSa
I fail too see how Mike is a good guy they were trying to say he was..
All SIGNS point too he is or was gonna try and control her life. She'd become a shell of a woman. And to be honest... She shows more fire with Edward when they argue or are in emotional moments.. I don't know if that was intended with mike... but I noticed that.
I fail too see how Mike is a good guy they were trying to say he was..
All SIGNS point too he is or was gonna try and control her life. She'd become a shell of a woman. And to be honest... She shows more fire with Edward when they argue or are in emotional moments.. I don't know if that was intended with mike... but I noticed that.
1/4/2019 c20 LolaTheSa
Honestly... that's all you the response you had for Edward when he said he was her first?
He should have said something about the heart is what matters and he's never even had a glimpse of it. I feel like Edward responses were just... not there when it came to the shit mike said.. I wanted him to be a little more hurtful to mike... Tho I guess it plays into his manipulative ways..
Honestly... that's all you the response you had for Edward when he said he was her first?
He should have said something about the heart is what matters and he's never even had a glimpse of it. I feel like Edward responses were just... not there when it came to the shit mike said.. I wanted him to be a little more hurtful to mike... Tho I guess it plays into his manipulative ways..
12/29/2018 c1 isabela melo
this story has touched me like no other. thank you for sharing. i've known great love, but for a few chapters you managed to make me feel more than i've ever felt before, even if it was just as a voyeur. thank you, thank you, thank you.
this story has touched me like no other. thank you for sharing. i've known great love, but for a few chapters you managed to make me feel more than i've ever felt before, even if it was just as a voyeur. thank you, thank you, thank you.
12/24/2018 c22 Catulla
Wow, this story just ripped me to shreds. I just felt the whole thing really viscerally. Brava! Beautiful story.
Wow, this story just ripped me to shreds. I just felt the whole thing really viscerally. Brava! Beautiful story.