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9/6/2021 c22 Dazzlingsparkle
loved this story! possessive.. wow... non virgin... wow...stylish...wow
8/21/2021 c22 TudorRoseRed
Beautifully written. Gorgeous. Adored this. Thank you.
8/20/2021 c22 23fanficsR4nerds
Wow. I'll be honest, I needed to wait a day after binge reading this story to be able to form any semblance of coherent response. This was my first time reading, and I can't say how many times this story has been recommended to me. I see now why.
Your exposition and story telling is masterful, and I do not use that word lightly. The composition of this story was genuinely artful. I often struggle reading 3rd person as I find it pulls me too far back from the story, but in this instance it was exactly the right call. Your writing was a master class in how to delicately balance 3rd person-panning to the right people at the right moment to give the reader those perfect little crumbs to keep the story going.
I was also blown away by the character arc of Edward. He was brilliantly depicted, and his journey was absolutely incredible. Every nuance, every thought he had seemed perfectly planned, and I felt his energy radiating off the screen throughout this whole story.
Beside him, I did feel that Bella feel short of her potential. I felt like because she never owned up to her part in the dysfunctional relationship-as well as let the men around her just tell her how and who to be-she needed something more to be on the same level as Edward was.
I was also hoping for more from the ending. We always say this when a story is good, but with the phenomenal turmoil and struggle they went through-not to mention the power of their love in the first place-I felt like the ending should have reached some sort of climactic Everest if you will.
Regardless of these two points, the story was brilliant, and though I see you've not written anything more in fanfiction, I hope that in your personal life you continue to write. You have a gift for the nuances of characters, which is rare, and reading this as a writer, I was continually blown away by your craft.
Excellent work, absolutely well done.
Thank you so much for sharing, and I hope that wherever you're at now, you are doing well.
All the best.
x
7/1/2021 c22 Jen
Always excellent
7/1/2021 c1 Jensindenial3516
I always love this fic
6/5/2021 c22 Guest
10 years later, and I've found my way back to this wonderful story. Thank you so much for writing it.
6/5/2021 c16 Guest
This level of writing is Beyond!
6/3/2021 c8 Guest
That " date rapist" cologne line gets me every time lol! So good.
5/31/2021 c11 Xxx
If this is Bella and Edward HEA I'm gonna go die...
5/29/2021 c22 raysa.aride
Reading this story 10 years later is so bittersweet! I was almost scared of it, since now I'm older and know much more about abusive relationships (having been in one). I could not only understand Bella much more clearly but also relate to her in so many ways. I still don't know how I feel about her choosing Edward, my skeptical almost 30-year-old self thinks maybe their relationship would in fact eat her alive. But I do know that the poem quality of this story draws me in every time. That part in which Bella sees his dreams during their time apart is one of the most precious things I've ever read.
Thank you for sharing this )
Much love from a reader in Brazil!
5/26/2021 c22 Jenycullen
One of my favorite stories of all time. Thank you!
5/11/2021 c1 levityoflonging
Often, I find myself getting anstsy as I near the end of a story. Even if I've been enjoying it, I'm ready to move on to another. This was not the case with this story. I was wistful for more. I wish you had written more stories. This was so beautiful.
4/6/2021 c1 AstridCullen
i re-read this story every now and then. It has always been one of my favorites. You're an amazing writer!
2/18/2021 c4 Guest
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And when you'll do it please make it known so I can buy it.
Much love
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