
6/5/2009 c3 TLammy
Wow, I have to admit you have me so very curious. I can't wait for the longer chapters and more of an explanaton ;) Good job!
Wow, I have to admit you have me so very curious. I can't wait for the longer chapters and more of an explanaton ;) Good job!
6/5/2009 c3
2Lavianca
you're an unbelievably, amazing writer your story and plot line seems interesting, i hope you continue this story and update frequently.

you're an unbelievably, amazing writer your story and plot line seems interesting, i hope you continue this story and update frequently.
6/2/2009 c2
1fanboymike
This is a really great story so far.
The description of both action and emotion is fantastic.
I'm eagerly looking forward to the next installment!

This is a really great story so far.
The description of both action and emotion is fantastic.
I'm eagerly looking forward to the next installment!
6/1/2009 c2
2hit-the-duckies
wow this story is really intriguing already.
like..the only defect i can see is that it only has two chapters, and i want to read more!

wow this story is really intriguing already.
like..the only defect i can see is that it only has two chapters, and i want to read more!
6/1/2009 c2 PixieSticks517
I like this story alot! I am kinda of confused about one little thing, is bella engaged to someone?
I like this story alot! I am kinda of confused about one little thing, is bella engaged to someone?
6/1/2009 c2 mrstveit17
this story is soo interesting! please update again soon cuz i really want to find out more about what exactly is going on...lol! You are a great writer!
please please update soon!
thanks!
~taybaskt22
this story is soo interesting! please update again soon cuz i really want to find out more about what exactly is going on...lol! You are a great writer!
please please update soon!
thanks!
~taybaskt22
6/1/2009 c2 TLammy
I'm enjoying your story so far, added it my alerts so I can continue to read. Looking forward to learning more about Edward and Bella's relationship. Very different story from what I have been reading. Good job!
I'm enjoying your story so far, added it my alerts so I can continue to read. Looking forward to learning more about Edward and Bella's relationship. Very different story from what I have been reading. Good job!
6/1/2009 c2
1LadyMiss
I am so excited to read on. For a debut, this is fantastic. I can't wait to see how the story progresses and I'm so glad you changed Bella's car. It's not that I hate her truck, but honestly, there is only so much you can read about Bella and her friggen truck. So thankyou. I kinda like possessive edward, im very excited about next chap, post soon? pretty please?
Here's a cookie. :) i hope you like it. ha.

I am so excited to read on. For a debut, this is fantastic. I can't wait to see how the story progresses and I'm so glad you changed Bella's car. It's not that I hate her truck, but honestly, there is only so much you can read about Bella and her friggen truck. So thankyou. I kinda like possessive edward, im very excited about next chap, post soon? pretty please?
Here's a cookie. :) i hope you like it. ha.
6/1/2009 c2 CullensAreIceCold
Wow. this is amazing. curious as to how this all folds out.
Well done :)
Wow. this is amazing. curious as to how this all folds out.
Well done :)
5/31/2009 c1 vampiregurl
i read the summary of this story and i like it.
can't wait for the next update.
i read the summary of this story and i like it.
can't wait for the next update.