
7/20/2009 c1
4MLLu
How sweet! It's well written. Even though you haven't mentioned their name you can still figure out who you are refering to because of your characterization. I think this line is so good for some kind of reason, "Thank Kami…some old dogs can still learn new tricks…learn to forgive themselves and learn to let someone love them…" It just catches me when I read it (^v^)
Great little one-shot (^v^)

How sweet! It's well written. Even though you haven't mentioned their name you can still figure out who you are refering to because of your characterization. I think this line is so good for some kind of reason, "Thank Kami…some old dogs can still learn new tricks…learn to forgive themselves and learn to let someone love them…" It just catches me when I read it (^v^)
Great little one-shot (^v^)
6/1/2009 c1 konchibi
a short story,but a good one...
a short story,but a good one...